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Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

Jan 08, 2007 02:30

Sixty-fifth part of a WIP
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: NC-17
Please see previous headers for other pertinent information!
*Author’s Note: 1) When you get to where this request will make sense, please don't protest about what happens if all you want to do is complain ( Read more... )

you will not stop me., trust your feelings!, i love you!, . . . dying a little bit each day . . ., fear of loss is a path to the dark side., . . . living a lie . . ., let go of everything you fear to lose, . . . not this crude matter., your thoughts betray you . . ., . . . i've got a bad feeling about this!, you can't stop the change., you want this . . . don't you?, the force will be with you . . . always., there's been a disturbance in the force, . . . i love you . . . i know., i'll never stop loving you., we are encouraged to love, be mindful of your thoughts . . ., . . . luminous beings are we . . ., anger fear aggression...the dark side..., kenobi & skywalker - anakin & obi-wan, the force is . . . an energy field . . ., . . . i sense something . . ., don't be afraid.

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spartan_117 January 10 2007, 04:06:08 UTC

oooooh boy *fans face* Gawd it's prolly a good thing you didn't make the movie. I'm not sure I would have survived any of the love scenes if you'd done them *fans face harder*

polgarawolf January 10 2007, 07:12:29 UTC

I'll take that as a compliment! *Beams proudly*

The next bit might get a bit, erhm, weird, though. I had a plot-bunny with very sharp teeth bite me and I'm still not sure I shouldn't have just hunted up a fanwriter's version of a rabies shot instead of giving it to it . . .

spartan_117 January 10 2007, 11:33:32 UTC

Please do, love it was certainly intended as one.

*laughs* Nooo for the love of these two do not get that shot. Weired or no I utterly love this fic and if I didn't think it'd go through a ton of ink I'd print it out and carry it everywhere.

Dammit I love it when those two do nothing but kiss. *sighs dreamily*

polgarawolf January 12 2007, 23:41:03 UTC

*Beams contentedly, in that case. and basks in compliment*

I'd be afraid to do it. It might interfere with the plot bunnies I'd be happier to receive!
*Lol!* Over 1,000 pages in the WordPerfect file. I'd hate to think of how many cartridges of ink that'd use.

You're not the only one. Trust me. Kisses are such wonderful things to begin with, and theirs are just extra special because it's them doing the kissing.

spartan_117 January 13 2007, 03:25:16 UTC

Cool :)

Uh ok definately not printing it. Oh lordy it would probably be cheaper to take it to a printing place and get them to do it than go through all those printer cartridges

They are aren't they and when it's those two, well it just makes them all the more special IMO

polgarawolf January 13 2007, 04:16:30 UTC

*Grins* I'm editing a few things right now. Should get more of this chapter up tomorrow. Hopefully it won't be too weird!

*Snickers* Probably. I don't know. I've never been to one of those places. I was spoiled when I was still in school. *Sighs* You could always print things for free in the basement of Old Main at Franklin and the Writing Center at U of L used to have the same rule, as long as you didn't print much more than a hundred pages at a go (and they didn't pay enough attention as long as you broke things up into 100 page lumps and spread them out over a hour or so - 100 pages here, another 15 minutes later, etc.). I've just not printed anything much since then.

*Nods firmly in agreement* If there's anything more special than an Obi-Ani kiss, I've yet to discover what it is.

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