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polgarawolf

Star Wars work in progress You Became to Me

Oct 29, 2006 18:00

Fifty-ninth part of a WIP
Title: You Became to Me (as suggested by avari_maethor)
*Pairing: Mainly Anakin/Obi-Wan with some mention of Padmé
Rating: Uhm, probably a borderline PG-13/R-ish (?)
Disclaimer: I do not own the lovely boys from Star Wars, more's the pity! What I do have is an extremely contrary muse that refuses to shut up and leave me alone . . .
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how could it have come to this?, you will not stop me., "a certain point of view?!", fear of loss is a path to the dark side., let go of everything you fear to lose, i sense a trap., how is that possible?, you can't stop the change., i have a bad feeling about this., . . . i love you . . . i know., i hate you!, we have a new enemy., be mindful of your thoughts . . ., anger fear aggression...the dark side..., i sense a disturbance in the force, you assume too much!

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spartan_117 November 3 2006, 01:02:06 UTC

Hmmmm I'm getting worried about that blood red lighting of Obi-Wan Padawan braid. What's Sola up to that I'm not guessing? Apart from quite alot since I have no knowledge of her at all.

Just what do you have Anakin and Obi-Wan walking into? *worries*

polgarawolf November 4 2006, 05:57:01 UTC

The light isn't necessarily Sola's doing, though it is her fault. Did you read the small scene I had to go back and insert at the beginning of the previous chapter after you'd already commented on it that had an extremely upset Padme finding out about Sola's treachery? Reading that scene should let you know who's causing the light ( ... )

spartan_117 November 5 2006, 04:58:20 UTC

Ooooh ok *goes back and reads*

polgarawolf November 5 2006, 06:18:51 UTC

By the way, sorry if I went into lecture mode on my reply to that question. I was a wee bit sleep-deprived that night. I'm one of those weird people who babble even more when extreme tiredness starts to set in. Plus, since I've been filling pads of sticky notes and mini-notebooks and actual notebooks with reams of notes for the sequels for this baby for a lot of the whole past year, I tend to have entire complex backstories worked out in my head for a lot of the minor characters who show up mostly in the background or cut scenes of the films or else only in the EU. Sola's just happens to be one of those people. Which means I have a lot from my notes that I could babble on about her, as you can see!

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