Poetry. On the bus.

[polarisdib]

I live about 20 miles from campus.  This equals a 25-35 minute drive without traffic and a 45-90 minute drive with it.  So this semester I decided to try what dear 'Burque has decided to call the "Blue Line."  It's a bus system that runs every 20 minutes from the westside (approximately 5 miles from my house, yay!) to the Albuquerque UNM campus.

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[callmebee]

Sometime I use the wrong to/too/two and it hurts my feelings.

[arbitration]

It hurts your feelings that you use the wrong to/too/two? Or it hurts your feelings that you use to/two wrong, too? Bleh, now I'm confused.

Anyway, good post. Your writing style is similar enough to the DiB's that I am not absolutely certain that it is someone else writing until the very end. It's also interesting content, which is rare. So kudos!

[polarisdib]

Her writing style isn't typically like mine, she's putting effort into mimicking it. She's also doing a terrifyingly good job, which means I might want to think about reworking how I express myself. Mostly, the moments that get me in these posts are when she uses words I don't use, which actually fit better than words I do, meaning she says stuff like I'd say only better.

--DiB

[callmebee]

I'm trying real hard.

loved the pussy post, btw.

Cracked me up.