HOW'S MY DRIVING?

How am I doing with Elisa? Keeping in character is my top priority, so I'd like to know if I'm doing it right or wrong. Comment here if you wish to critique me!

[Elisa doesn't realize that Edward is gone, but she'd like to see the weapon's shop anyway, simply curious about what they have. At first, she shook her head at the name, then headed on inside.]

...Hello? Edward?

[She can already see why someone needs to be here. Swords, axes, maces, guns, several of them lay cluttered on the ground, even ( Read more... )

[By the fountain is Elisa with her usual wear, though topped with a scarf. She couldn't sleep, and thus, she's out here, hoping to find some comfort in the stars and the sounds of the water behind her. It's not helping very much, honestly, and neither is the letter that's opened and read in her lap ( Read more... )

[When Elisa Maza woke up in Luceti, she didn't panic or demand where she was. No, she just let out a sigh and a mutter before she flipped through the book near her to see if there was any information. She read the guide, all of it, and she found it extremely disconcerting. But at least she knows where she is and what's going on ( Read more... )