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Ficlet: Pattern Formation -- PG

Feb 04, 2012 17:08

Title: Pattern Formation
Author: jedibuttercup
Characters: The Machine
Rating/Warnings: PG
Spoilers: Set circa the pilot, with hints of backstory as far as "Super"
Notes: Speculative ficlet; nonhuman POV. (We need a character tag for that!)

Summary: The Machine was not, strictly speaking, a sentient entity. 600 words.

( Pattern Formation )

category: one-shot, category: gen, author: jedibuttercup, character: the machine, rating: pg, category: pre-series, episode: 1.11 super, fanworks: fanfic, character: harold finch

Comments 17

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jedibuttercup February 8 2012, 07:09:18 UTC

Thank you! I'll be kind of surprised if the Machine doesn't turn out to be some kind of A.I., but I really hope they don't go in a Skynet direction with it.

sunnybea February 5 2012, 01:44:30 UTC

Lol, the Machine is cute! =D

jedibuttercup February 8 2012, 07:09:43 UTC

LOL; I would call it more creepy than cute, but I'm glad you enjoyed my take on it regardless!

anonymous February 5 2012, 03:08:23 UTC

Awesome! Sweet machine! -KR

brickhousewench February 5 2012, 03:09:07 UTC

LOVE the last line. =D

jedibuttercup February 8 2012, 07:10:31 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the fic.

ext_548340 February 5 2012, 03:42:22 UTC

Completely believable and amazing! The Machine seems almost omniscient, and your writing is technically and emotionally amazing. Thank you, J.

jedibuttercup February 8 2012, 07:11:47 UTC

Thank you! I figure as much sound and visual input as it's constantly getting from cameras throughout the city and all the phones everyone carries around, it's got to know a lot more about Finch than even he realizes. I'm glad you enjoyed my take on it!