Fic: Damaged - Part 29

Aug 24, 2012 01:56

Title: Damaged - Part 29
Author: Katica Locke
Pairing/Characters: Reese/Finch, the Machine, Mark Snow, Carter, Fusco
Rating: NC-17
Summary: What happens when Reese can't be in two places at once?
Warnings: Slash, possible spoilers for all episodes, WIP
Word Count: 5300 words
Damaged - Part 1 - Part 2 - Part 3 - Part 4 - Part 5 - Part 6 - Part 7 - Part 8 - ( Read more... )

character: mark snow, character: detective lionel fusco, category: slash, category: wip, fanworks: fanfic, character: harold finch, character: detective joss carter, character: the machine, category: drama, category: romance, character: john reese, category: angst, author: katicalocke, category: adventure, rating: nc-17, pairing: finch/reese

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hpcool2003 August 24 2012, 09:28:01 UTC
Yeeeeeees! Finally! Mark Fucking Snow is finally gone! Good job TM for creating those files! Good job Finch for shooting that worthless sh!t and saving Reese.
Snow is indeed gone right? He will stay away from our exhausted boys? He better be!

Can wait for the next chapter!

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katicalocke August 25 2012, 00:56:58 UTC
I think Snow is gone. I haven't decided. We might hear from him one more time, but I really need to think about bringing this fic to a close. I have so many others that I need to work on.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^_^

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hpcool2003 August 25 2012, 12:05:50 UTC
Oooooooh~ can't wait to see what happens to Snow!
Hehe, I love all your stories! Can wait to see what awesomeness you'll bring to us next!!

Say a gigantic 'thank you' to all your plot bunnies for me will you? And thanks for the regular updates so that we don't drown in our pool of anxiousness!

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managerie August 24 2012, 10:24:21 UTC
Quote:"Slash fangirl, I bet. She's about the right age."

**Squee**

We are everywhere!!!!

Excellent chapter.
Nice handling of Reese's emotional state.
No sweeping it under a rug or moving on without hang-ups.
Quote:"These hands are very important. You need them to hold me, and to touch me, and to make love to me. So you need to take better care of them."
Awww!!!

Hope Snow gets to one of those horrible prisons with a nice big horny cellmate!

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aprilvalentine August 24 2012, 12:21:48 UTC
"Slash fangirl, I bet. She's about the right age."

How old are we, anyway? I'd say anywhere from 20 to 75. And I'm closer to that top number.

Great chapter. I'd rave more but I'll miss my bus to work.

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katicalocke August 25 2012, 01:02:41 UTC
Lol, I know slash fangirls come with a wide range of life experience, but I always picture us as a collective group at around my own age (early 30s). Although I have known a few that legally should not have been reading my stories, lol.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^_^

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aprilvalentine August 25 2012, 02:36:45 UTC
I think we all even out and I know I feel like I'm still in my early 30s, maybe because of being in fandom. Don't worry, I'm old enough to read your stories,lol. And I'm not really at the end of that spectrum I listed, just closer to it than to 20. I think my attitudes are younger than they might be if I wasn't in fandom and I have known creative, talented fans of so many ages. I got into fandom in my late 20s and had close friends of a wide range of ages, but we all felt so close it was like we were all the same age.

I'm so new to POI and I certainly love your vision of Reese and Finch and not only have I been anxiously awaiting each new chapter, I've been going back to re-read the earlier ones many times in the last couple of weeks since discovering "Damaged." Can't wait for the next one. Your mix of h/c and slash pushes all my buttons -- keep up the great work!

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kmmerc August 24 2012, 11:05:19 UTC
what a satisfying chapter! And poor Finch's leg - he can't catch a break, huh?

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katicalocke August 25 2012, 01:04:27 UTC
Thanks!
I know, I'm so mean to him! No more injuries for either of them, I think, just angst, hurt/comfort, emotional distress, and Finch being a total badass in his tech geek way.

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kmmerc August 26 2012, 02:32:25 UTC
Goodness knows I love totally badass Finch, and his badass baby, the Machine! Let the healing begin!

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g_shadowslayer August 24 2012, 15:30:21 UTC
LOVE it! Especially the way the Machine dealt with Mark!!

Have to agree with aprilvalentine on the slash fan age bit - I'm closer to the top number too (though I was already slashing characters when I was about 13 and just didn't know I was...) :D

LOL Fusco...

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katicalocke August 25 2012, 01:06:18 UTC
Thanks!

Lol, I know slash fangirls come with a wide range of life experience, but I always picture us as a collective group at around my own age (early 30s). Although I have known a few that legally should not have been reading my stories, lol.

You're only as old as you act, after all. :P

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katicalocke August 25 2012, 01:06:30 UTC
Thanks! ^_^

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