Fic: Damaged - Part 29

[katicalocke]

Title: Damaged - Part 29
Author: Katica Locke
Pairing/Characters: Reese/Finch, the Machine, Mark Snow, Carter, Fusco
Rating: NC-17
Summary: What happens when Reese can't be in two places at once?
Warnings: Slash, possible spoilers for all episodes, WIP
Word Count: 5300 words
Damaged - Part 1 - Part 2 - Part 3 - Part 4 - Part 5 - Part 6 - Part 7 - Part 8 -

Comments

[mamahub]

Go Machine! You can "reformat" Mark F-ing Snow anytime you want! Preferably by sending him permanently to a rat, flea and bedbug infested cesspool in Siberia!

And all of us slash fangirls of a "certain age" are all looking at Harold and John as if they were "cuter than a basket of puppies"! :D

Hope poor Harold is OK soon!!??

[katicalocke]

I think a Siberian cesspool would be too good for him, lol! I don't think the 'reformatting' would hold up under close scrutiny, but it worked to get him arrested. I think he might make one more brief appearance before the end of the fic.

Harold will be fine. John will kiss it and make it better, lol. :D

Thanks for commenting! ^_^

[mrs_finch9]

Great chapter, love it! My (our) Finch is so brave. I love him. I hate to see my (our) John suffering, I want to hug him :)
Sometimes I discretely act like the waitress when I see a gay couple, my granny thinks I'm mentally ill Haha!!.We are everywhere!! How old are we anyways (I'm 22).

Imagine Finch reading slash! Are there any men on this comm?

Go team Machine (and Fusco)!!! 

[katicalocke]

Thank you! I think they both need hugs after this, lol.

I do, too! And then I feel embarrassed because even if they didn't notice, I'm sure they wouldn't want some random fangirl secretly squeeing over them, lol. I'll be 32 in November.

I don't know if there are any men. I would guess so, even if most of them don't read the slash stories. And I have imagined Finch reading slash, lol. In fact, I had a cracky plot-bunny visit me the other day with an idea where the characters (Reese and Finch) knew they were in a TV show and Finch stumbled across our comm and talked Reese into giving a slash relationship a try. Like I don't have enough stories that I'm working on. XD

[hpcool2003]

That's a lovely bunny, yes, very lovely ;)

[mamahub]

Oh yes that IS quite a lovely bunny, isn't it? So lovely in fact that I hope our dear Katica will be stunned by it's beauty and hypnotized into writing its story -SOON!! Who needs sleep, right? LOL!

[cassiopaya]

What?! Oh no! ::hugs the boys:: At lest the Machine was able to reformat Snow.

[katicalocke]

Thanks for reading and commenting! ^_^ I'm sure they'll appreciate the hugs. I've been very mean to them for quite a while.

[zootsuitzappy]

Dear god, how is it that you're still my favorite PoI writer? I mean, you continue to amaze me. Just when I think I know the level of brilliance you possess, you exceed it with the new chapter.

Hope Harold is going to be okay, and I have a feeling that John is going to break into the police station just so he can kill Mark.

[poetfades2black]

My favorite part: He reached out and took Reese's hand - the one he'd used to break the tiles in the motel bathroom. His knuckles were bruised, the cuts scabbed over, and Finch placed his other hand lightly over Reese's. "These hands are very important. You need them to hold me, and to touch me, and to make love to me. So you need to take better care of them."

I also loved this exchange:
Reese drew a shaking breath. "Harold...I..."
"I know," Finch said. "Me, too."

This was a good chapter. Reese still has some emotional healing to do as well as Finch's physical healing but they can definitely help each other heal right? More comforting.

I like how you write Fusco and Carter too, very on point. Snow is finally getting his, or at least I hope. He isn't gonna escape or anything. I guess I'm always a bit skeptical.