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As In the Heavens 1-6

Jul 31, 2009 14:34

Title: As in the Heavens 1-6
Author: Poetics124
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Spock/Uhura, Spock Prime
Summary: She could not hold him any longer. *The third story in the Primal Universe*
Disclaimer: Star Trek belongs to Paramount

( She could hold him no longer. )

fan: fan fiction

Comments 8

recumbentgoat July 31 2009, 19:05:47 UTC

:O wow. that was a helluva way to end. LOL. i love that you've got Spock Prime in here--and that he's named him after Kirk XD oh this is going to be great.

poetics124 July 31 2009, 19:24:46 UTC

I hope it is enjoyable. Thanks for the comment. There are a lot more twists and turns up ahead.

brightnova July 31 2009, 19:26:42 UTC

He finally pulled her closer to him and laid his chin on her head.

;__; so tender and sweet of him and not illogical if he wants to sooth his human girlfriend ;-;

“Holy shit!” Kirk whispered to himself.

“I concur.” Commander Spock answered.

I howled with laughter!! What a great scene!

Spock held the baby slightly away from him, his head tilted to the side as if he were trying to solve a complicated puzzle

HA!!! I could so see Quinto-Spock acting in thi exact fashion, bravo for great characterization

GUHHHH I loved your stories when you started posting a few months ago with The PonnFarr story, and for some reason I have missed all the other good stuff you have churned out.
How I don't know! but I have a lot of catching up to do!
But , in a way it's a welcome treat to have so much good stuff to catch up on :-D

poetics124 July 31 2009, 19:38:28 UTC

Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapters.

I must admit the Spock Prime parts were some of my favorite parts to write in the story, especially Kirk's reactions to them. lol

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poetics124 July 31 2009, 20:17:05 UTC

Thank you. It is very much appreciated. I hope you enjoy the rest.

wyntreaurora August 4 2009, 06:23:47 UTC

Favorite moments:

Kirk: Holy shit
Spock: I concur - it's totally like my icon! hehe

Spock being all puzzled by the baby - like brightnova said, I can totally see ZQ acting this out perfectly! It speaks to a GREAT characterization on your part.

The parts where Spock is shirtless - shallow of me yes, but any excuse to picture ZQ as Spock shirtless is a lurvely little moment of fiction for me ;-)

*skips off to read the next installment* Shoot, I'm spoiled, cuz now I'll have to wait for more after I read those!

modestgoddess79 August 13 2009, 22:01:21 UTC

this is an exciting story, can't wait to find out what happens next