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Fic: If You Want Me (Chlollie, 5/10)

Sep 17, 2013 23:41

Author: Poetgirl925

Title: If You Want Me

Summary: Chloe steps outside her comfort zone while on an internship in Star City, California. Returning to Metropolis, she's determined to focus on her career while attempting to fix the mess her personal life is in. But just when things seem to be getting back to normal, Oliver Queen arrives in ( Read more... )

smallville, character: chloe sullivan, character: oliver queen, fanfiction, fic: if you want me, character: clark kent, chlollie, character: lois lane, character: perry white, character: tess mercer

Comments 35

ext_2064707 September 18 2013, 00:30:05 UTC

Admittedly I squealed a little seeing a new chapter up! What can I say, I'm a little addicted to your fics! Also, I hope your kitty feels better and good luck with the upcoming surgery!

poetgirl925 September 28 2013, 15:36:14 UTC

Thanks! Zafarana is doing better these days - I'm hoping she won't start the heat cycle again before her surgery next month.

I'm glad I can entertain you with my stories. They're fun to write, and I only wish I had more time for them (and a better Internet connection.) The next chapter is coming soon - I've already sent it to my beta. It's a long one (5,500 words) and it starts moving the Chlollie 'ship along. Thanks for your comments!

madlenita September 18 2013, 00:45:50 UTC

Oh, poor Chloe.... And Clar don't suspect anything, even if he notice more now...
Thanks for new chapter, i can't wait for another GA/Chloe metting....

poetgirl925 September 28 2013, 15:38:01 UTC

Clark doesn't remain totally ignorant for too much longer - Oliver's behavior at the barbecue starts raising some questions ;-)

I'll have the new chapter up soon - I've already sent it to my beta. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

artgirltx September 18 2013, 02:16:22 UTC

I'm really liking this story. Can't wait to see how this barbecue goes down.

poetgirl925 September 28 2013, 15:41:04 UTC

The barbecue is interesting (I hope) - it's from Oliver's POV, and he's working through a mixture of anger, desire and jealousy. Things start moving along more in the next chapter - it's long and there's a lot going on. I've already sent it to my beta, so I'll have it up soon. Thanks for reading and commenting! Glad you're enjoying the story :)

purple_moon123 September 18 2013, 03:45:58 UTC

Oh hun I hope that your kitty gets better.

How awkward!! Poor Chloe having to deal with a pissy Oliver and an oblivious Clark.

Can't wait for the barbecue and of course Chloe and Green Arrow meeting.

poetgirl925 September 28 2013, 15:55:28 UTC

Lots going on in the next chapter - the barbecue definitely gets awkward :) The next chapter is pretty long and it's largely from Oliver's POV, so you can see where his head is at. I've already sent Ch. 6 off to my beta, so I'll get it posted soon. Thanks for reading and commenting :)

sfmutti September 18 2013, 07:38:06 UTC

I have a small problem of waiting until fics are finished before diving in but when you'd mentioned in a AN that this would be as long as RKC, which is Awesome!!! btw, my impatience got the better if me.
I love this story! I wasn't sure what to expect with Lucy as a supporting character in the first Chapter. It's very rare that she pops up in fics, especially in a positive role but I liked that she could push Chloe to be adventurous without being too "enthusiastic." The conversations between Oliver and Hal were natural and humorous. But this chapter was my favorite so far. Oliver leaving the card in her desk was a not so subtle way to call Chloe's attention. Passive aggression is always entertaining, especially when the recipient is clueless. Chloe, he kept the card, duh!!! Thank you for sharing and I'm looking forward to your next chapter!!!

poetgirl925 September 28 2013, 16:01:20 UTC

First, I'm happy you liked Red K Caper! That story was all kinds of fun to write. I'm toying with the idea of another Halloween fic for next month - we'll see how it pans out.

And I'm glad you're enjoying this story. It's a departure for me since it's an origin story, but it opened up a lot of possibilities. I've just tossed canon out the window and I'm basically doing what I want - hence Lucy's appearances here. She pops up again in Ch. 7. We saw an antagonistic relationship between her and Lois on the show, but we never got an explanation for it. So, I decided to play with that here.

Dialogues used to be a problem for me, so I'm glad you find the conversations natural. It's something I've worked to improve. The next chapter is long and mostly from Oliver's POV, so you can see where his head is at. I've already sent it to my beta - I'll get it up soon. Thanks so much for reading and commenting :)