Author: Poetgirl925
Title: If You Want Me
Summary: Chloe steps outside her comfort zone while on an internship in Star City, California. Returning to Metropolis, she's determined to focus on her career while attempting to fix the mess her personal life is in. But just when things seem to be getting back to normal, Oliver Queen arrives in
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Great chapter! OMG it was so funny seing Ollie angry. He looked angry and jealous. I'm so interested in the next chapter
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I didn't want this to end! This chapter was amazing. Loved the hostile Chloe/Oliver interaction and what it says about them both. Neither of them would be that vicious if they were indifferent about each other.
He turned to Chloe. “I’m sorry, what was your name again?” Ouch!
Also love when Lois has to slap some sense into Chloe: “Chloe - where the hell is your brain?" Heee.
I know you have a life (hope your kitty is ok), so just know your time is much appreciated. Love this, love Letting Go, and I will try and wait patiently for updates. Thanks! :)
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I sent Ch. 6 to my beta last night, so I should have an update ready for you guys soon. And it's quite a long chapter - about 5,500 words I think. I'm tweaking Letting Go now (no beta there unfortunately) and I want to post that update next week or weekend. I'm slow, but nothing will be abandoned.
Thanks for such nice comments! More coming soon :)
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And we get some of Oliver's POV in the next part. I sent Ch. 6 to my beta last night, so I should have an update for you soon. Thanks for reading and commenting :)
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