Fic: If You Want Me (Chlollie)

[poetgirl925]

Author: Poetgirl925

Title: If You Want Me

Summary: Chloe steps outside her comfort zone while on an internship in Star City, California. Returning to Metropolis, she's determined to focus on her career while attempting to fix the mess her personal life is in. But just when things seem to be getting back to normal, Oliver Queen arrives in Metropolis

Comments

Loved the update ...

[voz_76]

But you left me hanging! Can't wait for the next update 😊. Chloe thinking Ollie won't know her real name BUT Ollie knowing it and thinking not only did she lie but that she is a cheater ... Uh oh! I wonder what will happen at the press conference. Chloe is in TROUBLE! Will Davis make an appearance? If so, I hope not completely evil, if you choose that route, since the actor played his conflict beautifully until TPTB flipped it. I would like genuine conflict between Chloe and choosing between Ollie and Davis in some future fic if not this one. I think you write beautifully and would love to see your take on it if you decide to - no pressure 😉. Love that Tess isn't evil and is somehow involved in the JLA. Will Carter be introduced? I would love a Chloe and Carter relationship since they are so snarky - LOL! Lastly, I am enjoying Lucy and Chloe's relationship because they didn't get much screen time on Smallville. Keep up the great work!

Re: Loved the update ...

[poetgirl925]

Sorry about the cliffie! I'll try not to leave you hanging too long. No plans for Davis in this story, but I have been thinking about a story set during S8 that would explore the Davis conflict. I'd never write him as completely evil since I agree that the actor walked the line very well - it didn't make sense to me that he murdered Jimmy. As for Carter, no plans for him in this one either, but he'll play a much bigger part in Into the Dark, and he's in Shadows once I get back to that one. There's more of a Chloe/Carter friendship in Into the Dark though.

Glad you like this story! I'm enjoying including Lucy in this one - I like playing with new characters. Chlollie reunion up next - thanks for your comments :)

[malugargula]

Uh oh Chloe's in big trouble
Can't wait to see what's going to happen
:)
I hope your cat's better now. Thanks for updating.

[poetgirl925]

Yep! Bumpy road ahead for Chloe and Oliver, but it all works out in the end. And Zafarana is better now, thanks. She quit screaming on Sat. night just in time for me to go back to work. Hopefully the vet will spay her before this happens again.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story - thanks for reading!

[tadashee]

oh no! oliver is going to get the wrong impression! i like this clark, and i like lucy too! cant wait for the next part!

[poetgirl925]

He's definitely getting the wrong impression lol. And characterizations are tricky, so I'm glad you like Clark and my inclusion of Lucy in this fic. I'll get more up soon - thanks for commenting :)

[bublee3]

Ohhh my god, you can not end this way!?!? Oliver has finally discovered the identity of her blonde, yeppp!!! but seriously... are you going to leave us a week with the uncertainty? I can not wait to see the meeting of this couple. Please tell me you go up the next chapter soon, lol

[poetgirl925]

I'll try not to leave you in suspense too long lol. I wish I had more time for these stories. Awkward Chlollie reunion up next! Thanks for reading :)

[madlenita]

Miraculosly my ff and lj sites both working!!!!
So i was writing this while i was reading...
:
" between you and Lois, we’re going to end up married with a dog and 2.2 kids", omg, it was wonderful! So trey practically tretend to be a couple, what a complication on futere chlollie front!!!
And "that not even Clark at his most oblivious could ignore it.", it really had to be obvious ;-)

And Tess, well, i really hope that she will stay good, and she knows about Green Arrow.....
And the ending of chapter, well, angry Oliver.... And now he knows who Chloe is... I wondered how this metting will go now...
I can't wait for next chapter....
I forgot, i didn't notice any error...

[poetgirl925]

It's definitely a complication! Glad you're enjoying the ride and all my little twists and turns. And Tess is a good guy here :). Thank for commenting! More coming soon!