Fic: A Walk on the Wild Side (Chlollie, 8/10 - Part 2)

[poetgirl925]

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[gladz25]

Im so glad you have updated since i have been checking up on the updates. Never one to disappoint. I cannot wait to read the next chapter esp since lois now already knows. I hope oliver will get a big slap or a wake up call. I would also like to see him fret a bit and for chloe to make it hard for him. Great update.

[poetgirl925]

Don't worry, Oliver will be doing a bit of fretting before the end of the story. I'm really glad you enjoyed the update. Thanks so much for reading! I'm doing some final edits on Part 9 but I'll try to get it up by the weekend :)

[tadashee]

Love it! I loved that lois figured it out! I wonder what is going to happen next!

[poetgirl925]

I felt like Lois had to figure it out once I threw them all together, you know? And she had already done a bit of sleuthing as you'll find out in Part 9. Anyway, the final parts have a lot going on, and I'm doing final edits now. I'm glad you enjoyed this update! Thanks for the comments :)

[jediyoda99]

I love this update! Poor Ollie and Chloe hurting themselves because of miscommunication. They should just be straight up with each other and they could have avoided all this hurt. But am I glad that Lois found out on who Mr. Douchebag is.Cant wait for the next chapter! :)

[poetgirl925]

I felt like I was justified in writing Oliver this way because of the time frame. He had trouble sharing his failures and his troubles at that time, so lack of communication is kind of a theme here. They've both made certain assumptions about the nature of the relationship, but neither of them really knows what the other is thinking at this point. Lots more to come though! Really happy you enjoyed the update. Thanks for the comments!

[dreammaker101]

Great chapter! Loved everything about it -- the Chlark friendship (Clark knew Chloe's cycle! lol!), Lois's perception in seeing that Ollie was acting weird and in discovering that he was the "douchebag," how Oliver took his business responsibilities seriously, questioned his commitment to his work and Chloe's affect on him, Oliver's flowers and apology, and George's interest in Chloe. Thanks for posting. Can't wait for the next chapter.

[poetgirl925]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I loved the Chlark friendship on the show, so I've been trying to incorporate more of it in my stories. And Lois really had to figure it out b/c she's too smart not to. As for Oliver, he's struggling more in this story with emotional intimacy, and it's been interesting to write. He's starting to realize how much he needs Chloe though. Lots more coming and I will get it up soon. Thanks for the comments! :)

[ica013]

So much win in this chapter... First an honest to goodness Chlarky moment, The three of them hanging out....Love the Doom 2 reference.

The misunderstanding between Chloe and Oliver added tension without being too angsty (yet anyways)

Love Love Love it.

[poetgirl925]

I'm really glad you liked it. I know the premise of the story was kind of smutty, but I wanted it to be about more than that, too. It was kind of difficult to strike a balance as a result. Have you seen the Dhoom movies? The second one is my favorite, but I heard Dhoom 3 is coming out soon- nothing like a good Bollywood film for entertainment value lol. More on the tension front in Part 9 before things start getting resolved. I'll get it up soon. Thanks for reading! :)

[ica013]

I've been hearing rumours about Dhoom 3 for years!... So I have on occasion watched a Bollywood movie or three

So can I anticapte Lois taking Ollie by the scruff of the neck at at the party - lol. Happy writing.

[poetgirl925]

"So can I anticipate Lois taking Ollie by the scruff of the neck at the party" - hmmm, something like that ;-)