Fic: A Walk on the Wild Side (Chlollie, 8/10 - Part 2)

[poetgirl925]

Comments

[madlenita]

Thanks for this part, so Lois figure it out ;-) I can't wait for confrontation with Chloe.... And of course now i wait for some Chlollie scenes after their separation...
Thanks again...

[poetgirl925]

Confrontations are coming! And it's Lois, she had to figure it out :)
I saw you asked about Letting Go and Shadows before- don't worry, those updates are coming along with the Baby Queen series. I've also finished outlining Into the Dark and it's about half written, so that will be my next after I finish what I'm working on now. Thanks a lot for reading and for your comments!

[karlakarol]

I've been out a few days, then just today I had a chance to read updates, is simply WOW, I loved this twist in the fic, I'm dying to read the next chapter. Congratulations on how you drive the story and makes readers we stay we always yearning for more. Hugs.

[poetgirl925]

Thank you! I'm glad you like the story direction and the pace. I love plot twists and trying to come up with something unexpected. I'm happy you enjoy my efforts - more soon. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[chlollifan84]

Oh my!! This was an amazing chapter, very intense.
And the ending was evil but perfect, because now I really can't wait to read the next one.

[poetgirl925]

There was a lot going on in this chapter so I'm glad you enjoyed it. The ending was a bit evil lol - I won't leave you in suspense too long though. Thanks a lot for your comments!

[bublee3]

Amazing chapter, so intense. I can't wait to see what happens next. I'd love to see a jealous Ollie ;-P Tell me you did not take long to upload another chapter, pleaseee, lol

[poetgirl925]

I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! More confrontations, jealousy and revelations to come. I'll get it up soon. Thanks for reading and commenting!

[snarky_blondes]

This is absolutely brilliant. I adore the Clark-Chloe friendship. A lot of people write Clark as an evil person and while I admit that he was an ass in season 9, and often treated Chloe a bit badly (by really not being to convey to Chloe she was only a friend and always stringing her on a bit), and he has a bit of a superiority complex, but in the end he means well and im absolutely in love with their friendship and i love seeing it being written, esp. So perfectly.

And Lois, oh Lois, how I love you. And I completely agree with you about the luthorcorp owns DP plot. (Plus why was he there so much when he has a billionaire company to run)

And is it bad that i kinda (really) like george and in a way im kind of voting for something to happen b/w him and Chloe as a wake up call to Oliver. On the positive, Chlollie is always endgame to me.

This is such a great chapter in general, amusing, sweet, with great dialogue. And what a cliffie, I cant for the next chapter.

[poetgirl925]

Thank you! I also loved the Chlark friendship, so I'd rather write what I loved about it for all those seasons than write S9 asshat Clark you know? In the end I'm usually just writing the kind of story I love to read. As for George- honestly I kind of love this character too. And we'll see him again before the end of the story. In Oliver's eyes, George is some very real competition for Chloe, and it's a bitter pill for him to swallow when he's faced with that possibility. I'm playing with an idea for a sequel to this story in which we would see George again. I've begun outlining it so we shall see how it pans out. I'm really glad you liked this chapter, and I'll have more up soon. Thanks for your comments!

[bublee3]

Ohhhhhh yes please!!! this sequel sounds fantastic (I love Ollie jealous), lol