I'm glad you liked it. Oliver is competitive, and I wanted to show that here. Lois is definitely doing some snooping in the next part, and she's being a little pushy. I'll get it up soon :)
Thanks! I'm still not that comfortable with writing sex scenes but it is getting a little less embarrassing lol. I'll try to post the rest this week so I can get back to Letting Go and Shadows. Thanks for reading!
Well you do a great job! I'm sorry the posting stuff has been such a hassle. Lj is weird. I really appreciate you posting the stories even though they have been so inconvenient. :)
Ohhhh this part is perfect. I love it! I was waiting to upload one chapter of this amazing story and has been perfect. Thank you!!! (please do not take too long to follow up chapters of this story, is great, especially Chlolliesex, lol)
Holy hell that was hot! I don't think you need to worry about characterization as it fit the characters and progression we saw on the show! Thanks for you battle to bring this to us!
I'm happy you think it's in character because that's something I was worried about with this story. I'll try to post part 2 when I get home later. Thanks for reading!
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