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poemwithnorhyme

I Will Possess Your Heart 4/10

Oct 28, 2008 21:30

Title: I Will Possess Your Heart 4/10
Author: yaoi_anti_drug
Beta: ladywilde80Pairings: Sylar/Mohinder, eventual Elle/Claire ( Read more... )

eclaire, mohinder, mylar, elle, fic, claire, sylar

Comments 24

bonniesrg October 31 2008, 00:04:18 UTC

I wonder what Elle plans to do to get Sylar and Momo together.
Sylar being so vulnerable is sweet and I love Momo's resistance to him almost failing.

poemwithnorhyme November 7 2008, 20:13:07 UTC

Thank you tons for the comment! Sorry it took so long to reply to it. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and might I say, awesome icon. ^^

bonniesrg November 8 2008, 16:31:34 UTC

Sylar aquired that piece of property a while ago.hehe

levitatethis November 1 2008, 13:54:20 UTC

It’s so fantastic to have a story like this to look forward to. It’s a compliment to you how you’ve drawn me in to the Elle/Claire relationship in a way that feels very real and very possible. For the position of power that Claire is in she’s also very much on her own and I like how this sudden scenario of Claire and Elle being on the same side provides the first impetus for seeing each other outside of preconceived roles or expectations. I like that Claire feels this worry for Elle in trying to take down an escapee and even though it’s initially Claire wanting to make sure all her employees remain able-bodied there is this more personal connection that gets hinted at later on ( ... )

slavefaith November 4 2008, 23:05:45 UTC

See this intelligent and well thought response?

x 2! :)

Awesome work again. Hope your feeling better.

poemwithnorhyme November 7 2008, 20:26:04 UTC

XD! Thank you so much!

I'm beginning to feel a bit better, but the medicine I've been given is quite, uh.. Different. It keeps me awake almost all day, and let's just say I feel a little high while I'm at it. lol! Thank you for your concern!

poemwithnorhyme November 7 2008, 20:21:12 UTC

Your comments are always made of such pure awesome win. *huggles you* Sorry it took me so long to reply ( ... )

aurilly November 2 2008, 03:04:46 UTC

This is such an exciting installment! I was really invested in the Eclaire this time. I absolutely loved the last scene. You write Elle so perfectly, I'm really in awe. I loved how you felt her opening up to Claire just a little bit and then shutting down again as soon as Claire said something obnoxious. And I laughed out loud when Elle didn't get all up in arms about Claire suggesting that they get Mo to sleep with Sylar. I am a little bit sad because I want Elle to be a really good friend to Mohinder and thereforen ot do this, but you know what? She's right. Maybe they should!

It may have been thrilling at first, but now it was simply getting old.
This was great, too. A lot of times, Sylar gets written as loving the chase, and I really agree with that, but in a future universe like this, I do see how it could get old. Sexual tension can only last for so long before people get over it or give into it. It can't go on forever.

So good! :D

poemwithnorhyme November 7 2008, 20:24:40 UTC

Yeah, since the Eclaire is so much more difficult to me than Sylar and Mohinder (probably because I've written them so much before), that I have to dedicate a bit more time to flesh those two out. Their hatred is on a different level then Sylar and Mohinder's, so it's a different process entirely. But it's been fun so far, and I'm glad you're enjoying it as well. Elle's characterization is a hard thing to get down since even she fluctuates a bit in the show. That you found it as being done right makes me truly happy, thank you so much!

Sylar loves a chase, but also a challenge. In a longer fic like this, it's more possible for me to explore that natural step in his desire. I just hope I can pull it off, since compared to all my other fics, this is almost out of my line of thinking, XD!

Thank you so much for the comment, and I'm sorry it took me so very long to reply to it!

anonymous February 25 2009, 17:12:45 UTC

Oh My god it's sooooooooooooo good please update PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

poemwithnorhyme February 25 2009, 22:51:42 UTC

Thank you so much for reading! Glad you enjoyed it.

I've been working on an entirely different fic, but I hope to continue this one soon.

Again, thank you!

themadbutterfly June 19 2009, 07:28:26 UTC

Do I love this? yes, i do! ^^

themadbutterfly June 19 2009, 07:29:42 UTC

I cannot find the next chapter? Does it not exist yet? I hope you will continue with this ^^

poemwithnorhyme June 25 2009, 20:51:08 UTC

I'm sorry to tell you that no, it does not exist and I probably won't be finishing it. I lost my muse for the story a little bit after Vol. 3.. However, I am in the midst of writing a new fic that I will finish before ever posting. It is also Elle/Claire with a bit of Sylar/Mohinder thrown into it. I hope, when I finally get to posting it, you'll enjoy it as well. And that one will be completed, I promise.

I'm very sorry for not finishing this one.. I know many people liked it, but I just couldn't continue writing it. I ran into a brick wall and just wasn't able to crawl over it. ><

Thank you so much for your kind words nonetheless, they mean a lot to me. I'm so sorry for letting you down.