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poemwithnorhyme

I Will Possess Your Heart 3/10

Sep 20, 2008 17:31

Title: I Will Possess Your Heart 3/10
Author: yaoi_anti_drug
Beta: ladywilde80Pairings: Sylar/Mohinder, eventual Elle/Claire ( Read more... )

mylar, fic, i will possess your heart, eclaire, mohinder, elle, claire, sylar

Comments 27

eternal_moonie September 20 2008, 21:54:53 UTC

OMG! I loved it! It was amazing!!! I hope you'll put up lots and lots more chapter-y goodness! You're doing a great job!

poemwithnorhyme September 24 2008, 22:48:10 UTC

Thank you so much for your support! Comments like yours, I look forward to them every time I post, so, again, thank you! *hugs you*

megmatthews20 September 20 2008, 23:57:18 UTC

Yayz!! I was all excited to see this chapter up! I had to pause from my run out the door to read the first bit and see what happened between Mohinder and Sylar...unwanted sexual tension for the continued win!

I love the relationships you're setting up here...the fear and confusion that Mohinder and Elle have...this is an interesting scenario!

cheers! <3

poemwithnorhyme September 24 2008, 22:49:04 UTC

Wow, you actually stopped leaving your home/room to read this?! That's such a giant compliment, thank you so friggin much!! You rock! ^_^

levitatethis September 21 2008, 02:38:21 UTC

Do you understand my excitment at seeing new chapter up ( ... )

poemwithnorhyme September 24 2008, 22:55:24 UTC

Hmm, I don't know if I dc. Do you understand my excitement at seeing your comment? XD ^_^ You always leave such great comments! They make me blush so hard ( ... )

bonniesrg September 21 2008, 09:41:15 UTC

YAY Sylar and Momo 'Alone time'.hehe

I can see that Elle and Claire's feelings about one wnother are starting to take a turn.

And I love Elle's knowledge that Momo is fighting against Sylar not because he's not attracted to him, but because he feels he can't give in to these feelings. And Elle's amazment at Momo being able to do it, cause she would have given into to Sylar ages ago.

And Sylar is obviously happy now he get's his Momo time.lol

poemwithnorhyme September 24 2008, 22:57:05 UTC

I'm glad you're noticing the hints at Elle and Claire's altering relationship, I must have done something right! XD

I really love how I can sort of show things through Elle's eyes, I think she's very interesting, so I truly hope I can do her justice. I'm uber happy that this chapter worked for you in that aspect, ^^

Thank you so much for commenting! It really makes my day/week/month, ^_^

aunt_zelda September 21 2008, 13:49:40 UTC

Oh, this was WONDERFUL.
KENSEI APPROVAL!
I'm worried about the Mylar, though. Mohinder doesn't seem to really like Sylar ... at all. Which makes the slashy goodness up until now non-con, which can sometimes be hot but is mostly just VERY hard to read. Deep down, Mohinder really likes Sylar, right? Please? Dub-con at the very LEAST? I can beg, if you want!

“I don’t know what to do, Elle. He’s not going to stop; he likes to torment me too much. And I’m afraid I’m going to end up breaking.”
*shivers* Ulp. I ... I know what that feels like. Well, not on the almost-rape front, but feeling like you're going to break soon and worrying about what'll happen when you do and having to be two people at once. *huggles Mohinder* We're going to be ok, dear, we're going to be ok ...

The teddy bear in the corner held a heart inscribed with “To My Daughter”, serving as a reminder of past weakness as well as the things she had lost on her assent into power.
*cough* HURRAY FOR A CLAUDE REFERENCE! *cough*

Sylar wouldn't take orders for long, but for ( ... )

poemwithnorhyme September 24 2008, 23:05:07 UTC

Dear god, this comment is a beast! And that makes me giddy like a school girl.. (.. You know, one of the ones that's not plagued by college nightmares, XD ^_^)

Don't worry about the mylar! As I said before, this fic is going to be different from all the others and I have seven more chapters to flesh out their relationship, ^_^

Claude reference? *confused* Am I missing something? I do that a lot...Do tell.

I absolutely love playing Claire this way. Being manipulative and crafty... she's a lot like me in this fic and I'm afraid I might project myself into her just a smidgen, but so far, I'm glad I haven't gone overboard. XD (I'm not really manipulative... just cold, ambitious, power-hungry... Okay, so, I'm more like Sylar.. Don't know why I see myself as Claire so much in this fic.. Out of the two girls, I always considered myself more Elle than Claire... Hmm... *ponders to self*) <--sorry, ignore that. XD ( ... )

aunt_zelda September 25 2008, 13:51:38 UTC

Dear god, this comment is a beast! And that makes me giddy like a school girl.. (.. You know, one of the ones that's not plagued by college nightmares, XD ^_^)
Hee hee, you're welcome!

Don't worry about the mylar! As I said before, this fic is going to be different from all the others and I have seven more chapters to flesh out their relationship, ^_^
W00t! *dances*

Claude reference? *confused* Am I missing something? I do that a lot...Do tell.
Tim Kring intended to have a clip in 'Company Man' where we learned that Claude was more involved with the Bennet fam and started the tradition of giving Claire teddy bears.

Lately I've been trying to pull some of myself into fics. That's why I think 'In Over Your Head' got such great responses, because I've been feeling like I've been two different people for the past few weeks.

The decimating things is much better now.

Elle and Mohinder's friendship is such a fun thing to explore, I'm glad you're enjoying it! ^_^
It's just so ... CUTE.

And yeah, Claire is a business woman, even with the ( ... )