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poemwithnorhyme

I Will Possess Your Heart 2/10

Sep 04, 2008 17:31

Title: I Will Possess Your Heart 2/10
Author: yaoi_anti_drug
Beta: ladywilde80Pairings: Sylar/Mohinder, eventual Elle/Claire ( Read more... )

mylar, fic, i will possess your heart, eclaire, mohinder, elle, claire, sylar

Comments 30

bonniesrg September 5 2008, 01:44:27 UTC

Haha I'm sure Elle will think of something to shut Claire up.

Well Sylar's always been obsessed with Momo, so no surprise that Momo time was part of his agreement with Claire...is Claire Momo's pimp now.lol

Sylar really should try and get some self control with Momo, cause Momo will not appreciate forced intimacies. They'd have a much better time if both sides are willing. Hopefully Elle will get back in time to distract Sylar and it's sweet that Elle is so loyal to Momo[in a platonic way, just the way it should be:P].

poemwithnorhyme September 6 2008, 21:29:15 UTC

Sylar is obsessed with Mohinder! No matter what happens, he's always drawn back to that man...and Claire is sort of Mohinder's pimp, now that I think about it...O.o

Exactly! Willing is good! And so, you solved the fic, mostly.."I Will Possess Your Heart", it's just that. Not just sex, ^_^

And YES! I love that you said "Platonic way, just the way it should be" because I concur completely! It's okay if other people ship them, but I'm not going to. They're much better as friends, with their banter and such...

Thank you SO much for the comment!!

levitatethis September 5 2008, 02:14:25 UTC

I'm so excited to see the second chapter up! I like the parallel stories you have going between Mohinder/Sylar, Elle/Claire, Sylar/Claire, Elle/Mohinder. Each relationship works in its own distinct way, each character feeling like their own person. That makes for a fascinating read because there are so many different motivations twisting and turning over each other ( ... )

poemwithnorhyme September 6 2008, 21:37:14 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! And yes, those different parallels are sometimes hard to get across, but I'm trying my best, so I'm glad it's working so far ( ... )

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poemwithnorhyme September 6 2008, 21:39:06 UTC

I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I do believe this is the first 'epic' Elle/Claire fic, actually...Don't know why that just hit me now. If I'm wrong, tell me, because I'd love to read one! Anyways, thank you for your comment, and I don't know how long the next chapter will take.. But I hope you like it when I do post it, ^_^ Again, Thank You!!

aurilly September 5 2008, 03:11:56 UTC

ARGH! LJ ate my comment. Trying again. Le sigh.

I'm loving this story. The lovely frienship you have going between Elle and Mohinder is making me unreasonably happy. I love how she is flirty but both of them know it isn't going anywhere and she probably doesn't really mean it; a lot of male/female friendships are like that, so this is a very believable way of handling it. I adored the bit where Sylar freezes their drinks (power usage FTW!) and how she asked to let them finish the drinks as a way of being a good friend to Mo. I also really loved her reaction to having to do paperwork; that was such a real life kind of whine about a change in management of a company... normal companies, and not just super secret super-powered ones.

Finding out Claire's motivation was very interesting and well done. I found it interesting that Mo doesn't figure much in her thoughts except as something to distract Sylar. Hmmm, many battles have been lost by underestimating our dear Mohinder.

Would you let me fuck you then, Mohinder ( ... )

poemwithnorhyme September 6 2008, 21:46:04 UTC

LJ is being kind of stupid lately, I don't know why. Not to me, but I've seen other people ranting about... Anyways, to real reply, XD ( ... )

theagonyofblank September 5 2008, 04:43:12 UTC

I'm so glad Elle is going back to help Mohinder!! For a minute, I thought she might just leave him there... Consensual!Mohinder/Sylar is better than nonconsensual, imho. :):)

But this is great. I can't wait to see how Mohinder/Sylar work out, and how Elle and Claire get together!

I was really amused when Claire called Sylar 'immature,' when she was being immature just a little while ago with Claire. (I like how you've captured her impulsiveness.)

poemwithnorhyme September 6 2008, 21:49:33 UTC

I'm known for my non-con fics more than anything else, but as I said in my author note, this one is going to be different. Also, "I Will Possess Your Heart", this fic isn't just about sex. So, that gives you a hint, XD! ^_^

I'm glad you're excited about the future chapters, it makes my day!

Yeah, Elle is quite impulsive and I wanted to make sure that was shown. Calling Sylar immature when she is obviously the most immature character on the entire show was just too much fun to resist.

Again, thank you for your comment and your support!