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poemwithnorhyme

I Will Possess Your Heart 2/10

Sep 04, 2008 17:31

Title: I Will Possess Your Heart 2/10
Author: yaoi_anti_drug
Beta: ladywilde80Pairings: Sylar/Mohinder, eventual Elle/Claire ( Read more... )

mylar, fic, i will possess your heart, eclaire, mohinder, elle, claire, sylar

Comments 30

drizztranger September 4 2008, 22:42:29 UTC

I tell ya what, this fic is really growing on me. Aside from the fact that I'm not really that huge into Mylar, I'm totally loving it!

Badass Claire is sexy and, well, badass! I can't wait to see things heat up between her and Elle...it's making me squee just thinking about it haha >.<

Keep it up, and stop telling me you're bad at writing! I love this fic and all I see is awesome potential that is being filled with every new post you make about it!! *hugs*

i_stalking_you September 4 2008, 22:47:26 UTC

As always you've turned out another amazing fic. I just read the first chapter before reading the second chapter again and I think you really did improve which is quite a feat considering the first chapter was amazing as well. Your writing has improved so much over the year it's amazing. You took something that was amazing and made it phenomenal. I'm really looking forward to the third chapter and I hope I'm able to give you a little help with it. Love yous!

teecub September 4 2008, 23:29:39 UTC

Eeeeeep! Hotness, intense emotions, and slashy wonderfulness - MM! I love this story so far. Sylar and Claire as a team makes an awesome twist! Thanks for sharing <3

poemwithnorhyme September 6 2008, 21:23:37 UTC

Thank you so much for your comment! Makes my day, especially since I haven't seen/spoke (typed) you in quite some time. Happy to see the familiar kitty, ^^

alicambs September 4 2008, 23:47:12 UTC

I really worry about myself sometimes, but Sylar hot for Mohinder and molesting him really, really pushes my buttons! And feisty, passionate Mohinder... no wonder Sylar wants him (poor Mohinder, he's in a bit of a double bind isn't he, serves him right for being so damn sexy :-))

I like Elle and while I've never been interested in femslash I look forward to seeing how you handle both 'couples' in this story.

poemwithnorhyme September 6 2008, 21:25:22 UTC

Oh, I know the feeling...I tend to put that in about every fic I write because it's so dang irresistible! I mean...just..mm, right? XD ^_^ And yes, it is a proper punishment for being so sexy!

I'm so glad you enjoy Elle, and that though you're not interested in femmeslash, you're willing to continue reading. That means a lot to me! Thank you!

megmatthews20 September 5 2008, 00:42:39 UTC

Ummm...SPLEEE! *kicks self for not catching this sooner*

Wow...I'm really enjoying the two pairings you have here, and the premise you have going for why everyone is being forced to work with Claire and Sylar. Claire's reasoning is fascinating, and I really love the concept of trying to save all the specials in the world in a way that's rather dodgy because damn...the girl just killed her own family. :(

LOOOOOOOOVE the tension between Mohinder and Sylar...and the ending of this chapter was just...yum!

cheers and much love for this!

poemwithnorhyme September 6 2008, 21:26:46 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it even if Claire is obviously a bit out of character. I tried to make her as sympathetic as possible but the Petrellis are a hard case to get over. I mean...they're so sexy! o.o

And there will be more tension to come, that's for sure. Hope you stick around. Thanks for the comment, tons and tons! ^_^