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Feb 26, 2008 02:16

Sometime between the third week of their relationship and the fourth week, Mirek's things start migrating to Brooklyn. He still spends most of his time in Manhattan--he has to, of course, he has a business to run, plants to tend to, family to check up on--but there's a particular point that Gideon notices that Mirek stops acting like a guest and ( Read more... )

original: k+f, pairing: gideon/mirek, character: gideon, character: mirek

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insomniac_tales February 26 2008, 17:50:08 UTC

I like the way you ended it here. It's nice and keys into the development of a relationship.

And you know me, I just go gaga for anything Mirek and Gideon.

pocky_slash_365 February 27 2008, 07:07:03 UTC

Awww, thanks XD

I'm slowly but surely plodding through. I know where both timelines are going, but it's getting there that's the hard part, you know? Especially in the kittens and flowers universe because there's so much I want to fill in before proceeding to where I'm headed.

If that makes any sense at all XD

insomniac_tales February 27 2008, 07:11:29 UTC

Absolutely perfect sense.

Sometimes I run ahead and write the stuff I want to get to anyway (because I'm a very naughty author). :)

pocky_slash_365 February 27 2008, 07:34:22 UTC

Ahahaha, I always write stuff out of order, and I'm sort of sliding into that with the NaNo project too, even though I'm trying not to. What I've kind of decided is to take particular "major" events in both timelines and allow myself to write anything in any order up to that point until I've filled in a satisfactory amount and will allow myself to write the major plot points and then move on.

If that makes any sense at all.

I really need to go to sleep, working tomorrow and all, but now I'm watching Freddy vs. Jason and even though I've seen it fifty million times and could write this shit, I'm staying up til it's over.

inocciduous February 27 2008, 06:45:34 UTC

Oooooooooh more of Mirek's backstory ... kinda. Or intrigue about it. The unnatural restraint Gideon shows is too adorable as is the bit at the end.

Also, can feel generations and generations of mothers and grandmothers rolling over in their graves made me laugh! It's so true :) I love the little details of their living together, and how Gideon should be having a big gay freak out but isn't, and ticklefests. ♥ !

pocky_slash_365 February 27 2008, 07:31:13 UTC

I keep forgetting that most people don't know Mirek's backstory because it (obvs) hasn't come up in the general timeline and I never finished the story about it in the kittens and flowers timeline. (That's an interesting story, too. I just have to, you know, finish and post it.) But I've had the whole thing all written out since I applied to the HWH rpg, so I'm always writing with it in mind. XD

Here are some tidbits that probably won't make it into any stories but are interesting nonetheless (and will tide you over until I finish something significant):
• Marenka was named for the main character in the Czech opera The Bartered Bride. She was very proud of this as a girl, but started going by her nickname (Mara) once she came to America because she doesn't like the way Americans pronounce her name ( ... )

inocciduous March 1 2008, 03:45:38 UTC

Hi, I meant to reply to this days ago. The last one about the name of the shop made me laugh -- how adorably indulgent of them and it gives me such an idea of what Marenka's husband was like. Their little family (Valentine included) is soooooo awesome. I feel as though if I went wandering through NYC I could actually find a little floral shop run by an elder Czech lady and co.

:DDDDDDD

(Also, I'm watching SGA and Michael is totally creeping me out. I just thought I'd share with the class.)