[selu] bright eyes and thumping hearts

May 05, 2013 19:31

sehun/luhan, some sehun/jongin. primary school au.
written for gabi's meme and so here's my first exo fic!!

Oh Sehun was a man! He could eat his lunch alone! )

fic: bright eyes and thumping hearts, pairing: sehun/kai, pairing: sehun/luhan, kids au, fandom: exo

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torakiss May 5 2013, 14:04:40 UTC
OH GHADD WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY

PLEASE KYRA YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE omg i am actually so curious about the "i don't write much anymore" description on your index page i mean WHAT ELSE DO YOU WRITE!!!!!! ;~~~~~; this is so cute and fluffy feels it's as if you're returning me the favor but of course i know it isn't!!

my favorite line would be:
"I'm six." "Sehun-ah, it's bad to lie!" "I'm not lying! ... How old are you?" "I'm eight!" "... You're the liar, hyung."
this got me laughing so much because SO CUTE!!!

and oh how dare you put sekailu HAVE I TOLD YOU THIS IS MY FAVORITE OT3!!!!!!!!!1 what is a krishohun or a krisutao can i eat that

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pockeeta May 5 2013, 14:42:11 UTC
I USED TO WRITE A LOT OF SHIT but then idk what happened that i haven't ... written ... anything else .......... BUT I'VE ONLY WRITTEN FOR KPOP NOW? LIKE THIS?? i only wrote for anime fandoms before ahaha (fluff is my forte bec i can't drama very well ;;) ehe i can return the favor actually!! pls give me prompts (altho i can't say i'll write it immediately but ... i'll ... try!)

AHAHAH I'M GLAD YOU LIKE

WAIT IT IS?? IT IS??? I'VE ALWAYS IMAGINED (yes krishohun or smth krisho) but mannnn sekailu is so good and can be so wonderfully angsty esp if you take in how close EVERYONE IS TO EVERYONE (of varying degrees/relationship types but nngg sekailuuuu)

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torakiss May 5 2013, 15:08:02 UTC
huuuuuuuuu what anime fandoms did you write sobs i seldom read anime fanfics AND OMG WHAT IS A DRAMA YES LET'S LIVE FOR FLUFF (altho i live for angst too)!!! meh i just want you to write more but no pressure!!! ;;w;;

choosing a favorite ot3 that involves my biases is such a hard decision to make really so i don't really bother to choose (SEE HOW INDECISIVE I AM!!!) there's krishohun, krisutao, krisukai tbh but mehn i don't want to choose so i'll go for SEKAILU

(and this is irrelevant but although i say yunjaechun is another favorite ot3, i like yunjaemin too orz)

하트 ♥!!!

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pockeeta May 5 2013, 15:26:45 UTC
ahhhh why anime fics are my life -- um i mostly wrote for kimi to boku (until rp came in and took over my life ahah), and i wrote for hetalia and ouran before too ~ i mostly rp tho so my writing goes there -- YES FLUFF IS A WONDERFUL CREATION THAT SENDS US TO A WORLD WHERE NOTHING GOES WRONG (angst in the middle of fluff and vice versa is so wonderfully wonderful ahhhhhh) www i want to write more toooooooo so gimme prompt ehe

aldkjaldkajk KRISUKAIIIII i've really come to like sukai lately idk why ahaha but they're really cute (i guess in "canon" partly bec of how tsun kai is to junmen aha)

(yunjaemin!! is my favorite esp yunjaemin family ; u;)

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xiaoqingxin May 5 2013, 14:49:37 UTC
OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG i'm a puddle of goo now. can there be a continuation where kailu fights over sehun

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pockeeta May 5 2013, 15:21:17 UTC
slajdalkd i'm glad that produced that result!! (just as planned!)

ahhhwwww that's so cute omg the mental image i can just imagine kai barging in on selu "lunch dates" or calling luhan a "best friend stealer" ADJALKD I LIKE PEOPLE FIGHTING OVER SEHUN ;;

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xiaoqingxin May 5 2013, 15:26:24 UTC
yesssssssssss so please continue this au. ;;

and one day kyungsoo will appear to steal jongin and sehun will be all TT^TT imissmybestfriend

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pockeeta May 5 2013, 23:49:48 UTC
<333 i'll try!

ahahah jongin will return the favor b (i'm not confident in writing kyungsoo but i'll try ;; ... if i ever ... figure out what to write aha)

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kira_min18 May 5 2013, 15:36:12 UTC
awww this is so cute and fluffy and i feel like sprinkling glitters all over bc sjsnjasjsjjdjdjd i love kids!aus ;;u;;

and the sekai friendship is just so adorableee~ ♥

thank you so much for writing~!

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pockeeta May 5 2013, 23:50:45 UTC
ahhhhh thank you so much! i love kids!aus too ; u; www anything with them as kids is instant adorbs aksjdakldjs

i love sekai friendship so much augh ugh ughhhh both in canon and in fanon ahah

thank you for reading! <3

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sagwassweetness May 5 2013, 16:35:13 UTC
oh the fluff in this fic!! just the right amount of fluff i needed :D :D
lmao sehun ans his peasant a.k.a kim jongin haha i love their convo
oh sehun you're hopeless when it comes to luhan...GOOD FOR YOU!!! ;P
is it too much to ask for part 2? :p

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pockeeta May 5 2013, 23:52:04 UTC
ahhhh i'm glad you liked it! thank you so much for reading!
kim jongin is forever sehun's slave (and sehuna is his pretty annoying princess <3)
lmao sehun is weak against luhan because he's ~special~ ; u;
www i'll try to ... write! i make no promises though ahah

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sagwassweetness May 6 2013, 18:30:16 UTC
i really love dumb jongin and dumber sehun-ah lol
i shall wait for that part 2.....no matter how long it takes haha

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hunhamburger May 6 2013, 03:48:20 UTC
I AM FREAKING SQUEALING
adorable little kid crushes are adorable omg

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pockeeta May 6 2013, 04:59:44 UTC
THE REACTION I WANTED AHAHA
they aaareeeee ;;; little kids with ~pure~ loves ahhhhh it's so cute

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