The New Boss - Chapter 23

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Title: New Boss - 23/?
Rating: MA 15+
Fandom: Torchwood
Genre: AU/ Romance
Pairings: Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: None. AU but the names of the Episodes are mentioned
Summary: There is a new Boss for Torchwood Cardiff.

The Next Day

Comments

[bluelilacs]

Oh, Gwen. Even though you took a longer break between chapters to give her time to pull her head out of her ass and look for her brain, she's still come up empty. Typical.

I loved Ianto teasing Jack sucking the cream out of the eclair and then licking the chocolate icing off. I can just see Jack sitting in a daze across from him and Ianto's evil grin. Of course Tosh would get a kick out of watching Jack being tormented by Ianto and ignoring Gwen.

It's going to be such a long ride home. Did I hear you say this was one of those specially equipped luxury cars with the ejector passenger seat up front? Hmm...I was sure I heard that somewhere.

[pmw10261]

Yeah there was a big delay - I had one of my kids (who is lucky to be alive) pour cordial on my laptop, killed the hard drive, nothing could be saved. Became despondent as had 4-5 chapters writen up ready for Wanda to beta. Now have a new hard drive, new house (didn't leave the child behind, did take him with us) have found my note books with the longhand version and will start to write up again soon - I liked the eclair bit too.

Ejector seat - hummmm good idea, Gwen splat on a road, building or under a bridge.

[zazajb]

God just when did chocolate eclairs become so darned sexy? Brilliant update, great shoes game and Gwen - hands [and you tiny little mind!] off!!!
D xxx

[pmw10261]

Yeah, Gwen is just so egocentric, she's like a three year old - glad you enjoyed