Prince of Tennis: Picnic

May 28, 2006 20:09

So... It's the third post for 30_kisses! Yaay!

Title: Picnic
Pairing: Fuji Syuusuke and Echizen Ryoma
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Theme: #19: 赤 (Red)
Disclaimer: Prince of Tennis belongs to Konomi Takeshi. This fanfiction was written solely for entertainment purposes.

Inspirations: The watermelon I ate today, the seashore breeze, the FujiRyo I read, and  ( Read more... )

30_kisses, fujiryo, fanfiction

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numisma May 29 2006, 02:26:22 UTC
*giggle*

Oh, such utter love for this.

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plotbunnytohma May 29 2006, 04:14:32 UTC
::grin::

I'm glad.

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plotbunnytohma May 29 2006, 14:20:07 UTC
Ah, me too. I just can't help it -- I like Tezuka too much to write a completely serious Fuji-and-Echizen-only fic. ^^;;

Thank you!

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plotbunnytohma May 29 2006, 14:26:45 UTC
Atmosphere... I tried really hard to get it right and write what I was seeing. I think I worked harder on that than trying to get the FujiRyo in... I actually don't like watermelon, though -- "too much faintly sweet water and not enough hard, biting flavor"... or so Fuji says. ::cough::

I'm such a fangirl of Sleeping!Ryoma. He's on my laptop's background. ::grin::

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plotbunnytohma May 30 2006, 06:08:00 UTC
Zwaaah! I forgot about that scene! I have to go back and upload it again because I recently lost all my files. ::grin::

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starkissed May 29 2006, 12:53:38 UTC
I loved the last line - "Tezuka looks horrified." And the omake is loads of fun, too. ^__^ I really love this, especially the description of what's going on, very nice prose. ^^ Great job!

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plotbunnytohma May 29 2006, 14:30:33 UTC
I'm too much of a Tezuka-fan for my own good. Eheh.

I don't usually do setting (emotions are so much more complicated-fun), but I actually liked writing it this time. It was clear in my head, so...

Thank-youuu! I'm glad you enjoyed. ^^

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bit_dreams May 30 2006, 03:40:56 UTC
LOL. The omake= ♥. But even better than that is the watermelon. erm. I just really love watermelon. ^^;

Mmmmm.. Watermelon kisses. It's the best way to taste the fruit, is it not, Fuji? LOL. Erm, I'll stop being so random now. *high*

I wonder what book Tezuka was reading. Please don't tell me it's 'Gravitation', you know, like the one in the screencap of one of the endings. Because... just no. ^^;
poor Tezuka.

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plotbunnytohma May 30 2006, 12:12:58 UTC
Heee. I like the omake too.

Really? I'm not so fond of watermelon. I hope it didn't show. But, yeah. Watermelon kisses. See, THAT'S the title I should've used for this 'shot! ::kicks current title:: I was so braindead when I posted this. High is GOOD.

Tezuka's book? For some oddstrange reason, I was thinking Death in Venice or The Picture of Dorian Gray. But Gravitation's cool, too... ^^ A screencap with Tezuka and Gravitation? I don't think I've seen it. Huh.

Poor Tezuka indeed. ::grin::

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