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Drabble: All Before Me Like A Dream (1/2)

Oct 02, 2009 22:16

Title: All Before Me Like A Dream
Rating: R for language
Pairing: Neal/David
Summary: Neal finally gets what he wanted from David.
Disclaimer: None of this is real. It's all in my head.
Author's Note: Inspired by the following pic and video (under the cut). Thanks to annie2791 for helping me every step of the way, and for the title!

( I feel sick, I feel nervous, I know just what I did to deserve this... )

fic, cookie, nc17, big!fucking!neal!

Comments 31

annie2791 October 3 2009, 02:32:10 UTC

Yay! I'm so glad you decided to post this tonight, BB. I love it. From the first moment I saw that video I hoped someone would fic it :)

One of my favorite parts is when Neal makes David repeat himself. He finally gets up the courage to say something only to have Neal say "What?" lol

And the thought of David calling Neal a cocktease does amazing things to my insides ;P

playingwithcake October 3 2009, 02:59:46 UTC

LYSFM, BB. :)

honestys_easy October 3 2009, 02:46:27 UTC

Okay, you KNOW I'm not a Cookmann fan but I HAD to read this just for the moment alone, and I love what you've done with what you can see in the source material and what is inferred...REAL hot. And of course Neal makes David repeat himself, that's just proving him right now isn't it :P

playingwithcake October 3 2009, 03:03:17 UTC

I have to admit, the fact you posted pics of THAT moment and mentioned me helped motivate me with this, bb. I actually should credit you and put you up there in the notes!

Glad you like it bb!

courts October 3 2009, 02:53:55 UTC

um, I would not be mad if you wrote a sequel detailing the later-that-night events. just sayin ;)

also, love this! :)

annie2791 October 3 2009, 02:56:10 UTC

That's what I said!

courts October 3 2009, 02:58:01 UTC

gmta, obv ;)

annie2791 October 3 2009, 02:59:14 UTC

Trufax ;)

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intrenches October 4 2009, 07:16:29 UTC

OMG OK SO IT KIND OF MAKES MY LIFE THAT YOU WROTE THIS.

Because I watched the video before I found out about this fic and just like, life-making. A'ight. @____@

aspenfallen October 4 2009, 07:55:06 UTC

I was going to finally leave a comment, but I can't top this. And now I can't stop laughing though idefk why XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

SO YEAH, WHAT MY WIFE SAID. ABOUT IT BEING GOOD AND STUFFS. *HEARTHANDS* ♥

playingwithcake October 20 2009, 17:28:02 UTC

Thank you hon! *hearthands you back*

playingwithcake October 20 2009, 17:27:24 UTC

Awe, thank you so much! There may be a sequel...

cherrymaryberry October 4 2009, 15:24:21 UTC

OMG!!! I LOVE IT!!!!

I would like to see the afterwards ;)

playingwithcake October 20 2009, 17:28:35 UTC

Thank you!

Maybe, perhaps, sometimes soon, who knows? ;)