Presentiment - Chapter 4 (2/2)

[playgirl_eugene]

Title: Presentiment

Author: playgirl_eugene

Pairing: Jae-centric

Genre: AU, drama, romance, thriller, suspense, psychological, mystery

Warning(s): violence, strong language, sexual themes, non-con, characters death (non-TVXQ), fashion kinks and eccentricity

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: This fic is purely fictional and I do not earn profit of any

Comments

[whatifgirl86]

Oh my goodness, very interesting chapter. Poor Jaejoong doesn't even know what's going on.

Very excited to see Changmin's role in this^_^

[playgirl_eugene]

thanks for reading and be the first to comment (￣▽￣)/ and yeah, jaejae is pretty clueless about what's happening. i want the readers to be in sync with his moods and feelings and they're not sure what's going on either.

and our minnie is coming in next chapter (=´∀｀)人(´∀｀=)

[porcupinelala]

I cant believe it ಠ╭╮ಠ i swear i posted my comment before sleeping today, wae it not appear??? ;____;

Ok, the thing is: GIRL, do u know what you did to me??? I cant sleep for a quite after reading your story (╥﹏╥) U know, i want to read something before bed *note that it was 4 in the morning* and i saw ur update at starcandy. I didnt know what that click lead me to, if i knew it's something can leave that great impact of scare and the urge to read all of 4 chapters, i would definitely not click it. U know i'm scared of horror films and novels so much ;_; Some scenes made my heart beat so fast, i felt like i was there, looking at them with my own eyes, and that's what left me not being able to sleep. U know, u did great, so please continue soon <333 (oh, is that i'm a masochist? want something i'm afraid of >___Oh *blushes* please ignore my bla-bla talking above if u want o(╥﹏╥)o Talking about the story, u got my surprised many times. At first i thought that u made 3 different Jaejoongs in 3 different worlds but no, they work at the

[playgirl_eugene]

wow, your review is the longest i've had yet! ヾ(＠⌒ー⌒＠)ノ thank you for enjoying (fearing) it that much!

i really like it when the readers actually caught my intention in my stories and feel like they were there and this one is targeted for adrenalin, of course.

☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆ it's the best kind of compliment.

as for the mysteries regarding jaejoong, moowon and jaejoon, well, i don't want to give spoilers so you have to read the next few chapters in order to find out. you'll be surprised though!

the next chapter has changmin (finally! i can imagine people saying that) ( ；´Д｀)

as for lacking reviews, i guess it's because i'm new? (T ^ T) do you know any other way to advertise a fic? or maybe tell people about it?

( *｀ω´) have a fab weekend too, sweetie!

p.s. and no, there isn't much to correct grammatically. dun worry.

[porcupinelala]

Awwww, u sadist, u want me to suffer from high blood speed, high beating rate and high adrenalin??? Jk, aww, i'm glad to be ur masochist then ✿◕ ‿ ◕✿

Oh, of course, dont mind me, i just raise my questions ^^v, i know u will gradually answer it :D

it's time for his evil soul to appear i guess (─‿‿─) (and dont worry, i think i cant wait 14 episodes for Lee Gak to recognize Bu Young's reincarnation, so 4 chapters is not a problem ^^)

Oh, is that so? T_T what about posting the link on tumblr or in _hug , i dont join _hug but i know many read stories from this community. Sorry i cant help much (ಠ_ರೃ)

Ah, my last question, i hope that u can answer this one, i keep imagine that JaeJoong, MooWon and JaeJoon actually have the same face and body but different hair styles and colors, am i right? coz i dont know how to think of them differently ^^;;;

p/s: sweetheart, u are so nice to me, i know i usually mess up my poor English ^^;;

[playgirl_eugene]

i always knew i had it in me to be the S in a relationship (￣▽￣)/ and don't worry, i'm not that evil to leave the answers hanging.

i'm just 85% of that (=´∀｀)人(´∀｀=)

anyway, about your last question, i'd like you to think of jaejoong in his mirotic era and for the rest, it's close.

i will post a character profile link after we got into the part where i can put up faces without spoiling the whole story. i think you'll get a better picture then.

[jaceni]

OMG.... Totally speechless and more intrigued as the chapters progress!!! O_O. The mind games you play with us and with poor Jaejoong are brilliant! I don't even know what to expect and am hanging to the edge of my seat with the complexity of the characters. ^o^/ I seriously don't know anymore who to suspect and really can't wait to see how this plot developes further. I'm intrigued with Min's role in all this and can't wait to see whether my suspicions come true or whether you'll throw me a curve ball. ^___^. You don't know how glad I am you chose to do this story for these character. T_T. Those are tears of joy by the way. ^_______^. Can't wait for the next chapter and thank's so much for the extremely long chapter!!!! :)

[porcupinelala]

*wave hands* hi jaceni. Glad to meet you here *huggles* i hope u have a good weekend too bb <333

[playgirl_eugene]

hello, sweetheart! \(//∇//)\ i'm glad that you're liking the progress so far. and though i'm not sure i'm that good, i'm glad you find my attempt at mind games and complex characters as interesting. it boots ego, really, since i'm pretty new in the community and my reviews are lacking for me to have more opinions.

i hope it's just the right amount of confusing though (((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o))) not until you find the story senseless and blurry, because although i tried to make it mysterious, i don't want the readers to be at lost.

ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=┌(;￣◇￣)┘ i will try to write the next chappie as soon as possible and though i'm not sure what your guess about min's role, i will try throwing - what's-the-word - a curve ball at ya.

*gives hanky* i'm glad that you're liking it too. and yeah, i always write long-chappie so if that's your thing, then good \(─‿‿─)/

[ae_yeon]

OMY! The interesting parts are slowing coming out!
Seriously Yunho only appear in a line here..
OMGOMG! I didnt expect Siwon to be dead!! I was like shocked from Hyukjae revelation..
after that I kinda know what wld happen to Hyunjoong..
Seems like Moowon/Jaejoon are starting to be v obvious now.
Leaving the pack of cigarettes and messing up Jae's wardrobe..
And the clothes left in the Jeju Hotel.. are those from Moowon or some prostitute?
weird.. I wonder why Jae's card or all max out..
Wont Junsu know that Siwon is alr dead? He didnt mention to Jae at all huh..

[playgirl_eugene]

（＾Ｏ＾☆♪ hiiii~ glad to see you're liking it. and yeah, i know that yunho only made cameo appearance in this chapter （ーー；） but dun worry. he's going to appear a lot more in the next chappies. i can promise you that.

about siwon, i feel kinda guilty about him ♪(´ε｀ ) but at least i managed to surprise more than one person with his death since they all thought he was simply stopped by jaejoong's father.

and you're a sharp one if you knew what was coming. about the moowon/jaejoon and junsu's thing, it's slowly getting more heated. you just have to read more to find out because i don't want to spoil the surprise.

all i can say is that you're pretty sharp, girl (￣▽￣)/

[hhazellee]

did jae really get raped??? D: i hope he's not though...that was...humiliating an traumatic! :O (but if changmin who did that i think i can accept it :3 lol u know i'm an hardcore :p)

i wonder if the murderer is really jaejoong's stalker., ...or just another twisted personality of kim jaejoong? well, like that one that happens to han jaejoon. (maybe though?) these three people (jaejoong, moowon and jaejoon) i think has a twisted personality.

but can't wait for changmin to get into the picture ^^

[playgirl_eugene]

(￣^￣)ゞ sorry, baby. i can't spoil the surprise because unlike other stories, this one relies on the mystery elements, so yeah, a lots of mysteries. sort of.

and yes, i know you're a hardcore fan! so am i! *･゜ﾟ･*:.｡..｡.:*･'(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)'･*:.｡. .｡.:*･゜ﾟ･*

well, one thing for sure, you must be open-minded regarding jaejoong's relationship with other characters, though i will not get into details about them, just sketching over it ♪( ´θ｀)ノ because i will get down to jaemin and 2u soon enough.

twisted personalities are my favourite topics. they're fun. yay!

and changmin will be there in the next chapter, all pretty and hot and ready to save our poor vulnerable joongie so look out for it ✿◕ ‿ ◕✿

[marchstrous]

Hello :) Usually I avoid reading WIPs because the wait never fails to infuriate me, but this story of yours seems so intriguing that I caved in earlier today, and hurrah! I've finished chapter 4 :p Also, I must say that this fic is quite addicting! If it were really a book I'd say I hadn't been able to put it down

[playgirl_eugene]

i know the feeling. i'm following a bunch of WIPs too and the wait often kills me, though i really can't comment on that because i left my fanfiction.net stories for tvxq fics ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ=3=3=3

[marchstrous]

Kekeke that happens to me too! The joys of discovering a new fandom ^^ you have a ff.net account? Mind if I stalk you? Who knows, me may have been in the same fandom other than TVXQ. I tend to collect stories from the author and would love to read your other works! :)

Aww my bf's also majoring in computer engineering and the result is me regularly spending my weekends reading fics until he's done with whatever work his professor manages to come up with. So because I kinda know how busy you are, I won't nag you for updates. Update when you can, bb <3

Oh and are you new in this fandom? Usually people would ship Yunjae the first time around, althought there are some who ships Jaemin from the very beginning, like me. Is it safe to say that you're just like me? :p

Btw, love the cute emoticons ;) put me in your stalker list!

[playgirl_eugene]

well, i can't say i'm a new cassie because i've been a fan since 2006 and a fanatic since 2008 (￣▽￣)/ the things that mirotic did to me