Presentiment - Chapter 4 (2/2)

[playgirl_eugene]

Title: Presentiment

Author: playgirl_eugene

Pairing: Jae-centric

Genre: AU, drama, romance, thriller, suspense, psychological, mystery

Warning(s): violence, strong language, sexual themes, non-con, characters death (non-TVXQ), fashion kinks and eccentricity

Rating: NC-17

Disclaimer: This fic is purely fictional and I do not earn profit of any

Comments

[marchstrous]

Hello :) Usually I avoid reading WIPs because the wait never fails to infuriate me, but this story of yours seems so intriguing that I caved in earlier today, and hurrah! I've finished chapter 4 :p Also, I must say that this fic is quite addicting! If it were really a book I'd say I hadn't been able to put it down.

I've read the book this story's based on, my mom being an avid Sheldon fan and all, but it was a long time ago...I guess when I was in 7th or 8th grade? That makes it about 4/5 years ago. I've finished a lot of his works, but Tell Me Your Dreams has always been one of my favorites, one of the reasons being I wasn't able to figure out what really happens to the heroine until it's finally revealed.

However, reading this fic, I can't help but to feel a tiny pinch of regret that I've read the original work, because I can't experience that thrill of guessing what's going to happen next when reading a mystery thriller - and I'm not gonna talk further about it 'cause some people are still wondering about what's really happening to Jaejoongie ;)

Your writing style, characterization and the way you carry the plot are really to my liking. The story is nicely paced, and the details are beautiful. Are you majoring in art/fashion? You seem to know a whole lot.

And to the readers who haven't read the Sheldon version yet, I must advice DON'T TRY TO GOOGLE IT because the spoiler would totally ruin the reading experience and this is one of the best fics I've come across in a while. I can't remember a lot because it's been years since I've read it, but I can say that the little twists that you've added to this fic are gorgeous. I don't feel like I'm reading a horribly similar AU based on someone else's book, but rather a well written fic. Keep up the great job!

Kudos for you (Y), now I'm gonna stalk you regularly for updates :) Cheers~

[playgirl_eugene]

i know the feeling. i'm following a bunch of WIPs too and the wait often kills me, though i really can't comment on that because i left my fanfiction.net stories for tvxq fics ヽ(￣д￣;)ノ=3=3=3

tell me your dreams is the only novel from sheldon that kept me interested until the last page (T . T) usually, sheldon's work lacked many things for me.

and though you can guess what's probably going to happen, but don't worry, there's a lot of twists i put up so that it became completely different halfway there and i really tried to add more details and personalized characterizations than sheldon.

i'm a computer engineering major with an intent to study finance and management actually Σ(￣。￣ﾉ)ﾉ i know my major didn't make much sense. i know a lot from reading (aka googling) and yeah, i have interest in those kind of things.

well, i really hope none of the readers will read sheldon's work before finishing this fic. i dun want my readers to lose interest so soon and it will spoil the surprise elements （；￣ェ￣）

d'awwwwie \(//∇//)\ one of the best fic in a while? i dun know bout that because there's a whole bunch of great fics out there.

stalk me! ☆*:.｡. o(≧▽≦)o .｡.:*☆

i mean, jaejae has his own stalker, so i want mine too! i'll try to update regularly but please look forward to it!

[marchstrous]

Kekeke that happens to me too! The joys of discovering a new fandom ^^ you have a ff.net account? Mind if I stalk you? Who knows, me may have been in the same fandom other than TVXQ. I tend to collect stories from the author and would love to read your other works! :)

Aww my bf's also majoring in computer engineering and the result is me regularly spending my weekends reading fics until he's done with whatever work his professor manages to come up with. So because I kinda know how busy you are, I won't nag you for updates. Update when you can, bb <3

Oh and are you new in this fandom? Usually people would ship Yunjae the first time around, althought there are some who ships Jaemin from the very beginning, like me. Is it safe to say that you're just like me? :p

Btw, love the cute emoticons ;) put me in your stalker list!

[playgirl_eugene]

well, i can't say i'm a new cassie because i've been a fan since 2006 and a fanatic since 2008 (￣▽￣)/ the things that mirotic did to me....

anyway, be my guest! ヾ(＠⌒ー⌒＠)ノ it'll be great if you stick around me since i always love another cassie! i have a bunch of fics there under construction though the first chapters are up.

(￣^￣)ゞ life sucks when i was still in engineering. i somehow ended up in finance and real estate right now so i guess life has a way of fucking stuffs. i'll try to update regularly though, hon! (#^.^#)

hmm. it began with a yunjae fic to get me addicted (￣ー￣) i got into jaemin soon after because i always did love their one-touch and honestly, they need more love.

i guess it's just because there are more yunjae fics out there and you have to admit that their influence is ah-ma-zing! i mean, yunjae looks so awkwardly real, it's confusing d(^_^o)

i tend to write more jaemin or yunjaemin than yunjae though ♪( ´▽｀) the 9 tvxq pairings are my ultimate otps though i HATE homin for obvious reasons (−_−＃)

recently though, it's been jaemin (forever otp) and jaesu, with a dash of 2u, as you've read. junsu's tarantallegra got me popping so many dirty things, i don't even know where to start writing it down ♪───Ｏ（≧∇≦）Ｏ────♪

anyway, keep on the look out for new chappies, sweetheart! i'll be waiting to see around, bb <33333