Drabble: Secrets That You Keep

Oct 24, 2011 15:17

I made a drabble for rispacooper because rispa always gets what she wants.

Title: Secrets That You Keep
Author: plainapple
Pairing: Shawn/Lassiter
Rating: PG

100 Whole Words )

shawn/lassiter, rated: pg, drabble

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elskegaderian October 24 2011, 19:59:24 UTC
This is beautiful, and I'm not just saying that because I have a thing for the phrase "Miscarriage of justice". ;)

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plainapple October 24 2011, 21:26:32 UTC
Thank you very much! I think you I and Lassie can all agree that it's one of the great legal terms. :)

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elskegaderian October 26 2011, 16:16:12 UTC
And I'm very proud of myself for showing enough restraint not to immediately jump to my "does a jurisprudence fetishist get off on a technicality?!" joke. ;)

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plainapple October 26 2011, 16:24:31 UTC
Oh, you shouldn't have held back, I love that! Very funny. :)

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tinted_glass October 24 2011, 20:19:44 UTC
"Miscarriage of justice" is my new favorite phrase. I love little snapshots like this, just getting to see glimpses of intimacy. :>

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plainapple October 24 2011, 21:24:48 UTC
It's a great phrase. I use it all the time. For example, "Damn it! Who drank the last of the coffee!?! This is a miscarriage of justice!"

I know, I'm not using it correctly, but that doesn't matter if you put enough conviction behind it, right?"

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janedavitt October 25 2011, 01:20:44 UTC
That is so freaking sweet. Aww. Love the possessive panic there.

And 'just' a drabble? Drabbles rock! Love them.

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plainapple October 25 2011, 02:01:57 UTC
Thank you! This was my first Drabble. Damn that hundred words thing, I had to edit out the bit about the breakfast burrito. I guess that's the point, though, boiling it down to the essentials. :)

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plainapple October 25 2011, 11:55:22 UTC
Now that I think about it, I think Lassie would be more likely to say "permanent police custody", but we all get a little goofy in our sleep.

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plainapple October 25 2011, 16:02:50 UTC
Snap cuffs, pat down and recite the whole Miranda.

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plainapple October 25 2011, 11:52:40 UTC
God help us should you decide to use your powers for evil!

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plainapple October 25 2011, 16:04:36 UTC
Oh, that's not creepy at all.

*excuse me while I back away slowly*

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