YanaKiri [ficlet]

Dec 27, 2007 23:16

Title: and caramel on top
Rating: PG-13 for inappropriate erections.
Summary: Yanagi invites Kirihara out on a cold, snowy day. And promptly proceeds to embarrass himself.

For shikishi who asked for 'Carmel green tea frappucino and a game of hands down the pants in Starbucks'. This is my rendition, Ames. Don't fence me in. :D

Hey, Senpai. )

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dynastic December 28 2007, 05:44:59 UTC
Oh, this is so freaking adorable. I'm grinning and aww-ing like an idiot right now.

His sister's bathrobe hung on the back of the bathroom door, but Kirihara would sooner freeze than catch girl-cooties.

Ahah, I love that line.



The only downside to this is that I really want Starbucks right now.

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pixxers December 28 2007, 13:37:59 UTC
Kirihara's sister is a bitch, I'm certain. :D

♥ Thank you Missaface.

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uminohikari December 28 2007, 06:22:12 UTC
Akaya is so cute ♥

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pixxers December 28 2007, 13:38:25 UTC
Couldn't you eat his little birdnest head? :D

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toastofrassilon December 28 2007, 06:30:59 UTC
Sometimes, Kirihara got hard in Math class - he knew how it went.

Was it all that talk about uhhh..lines and curves? 8D XDDD

Loved it, even though I'm not a YanaKiri shipper. One tinsy little grammar thing I noticed, though...

"Huh?" He demanded, affronted.

The "He" should be lowercase, I think. >>; Other than that, A++. :D

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pixxers December 28 2007, 13:40:18 UTC
Hey. Math class can be very erotic. :O

♥ Thanks babe ~ who do you prefer Yanagi and Kirihara paired with?

Ehehe. That's not a grammatical error - Kirihara is just god. He's been hanging around Yukimura and it's rubbed off. :P Thank you - will fix it.

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toastofrassilon December 28 2007, 18:24:01 UTC
XD I tended to fall asleep during math class.

You're welcome~. Hmm, I always prefer Yanagi with Inui (I blame my inner geek), and Kirihara with uhhh....I don't actually know. XD There've been a few Kiri/Kamio fics I liked. :D;

XDDDD If Kirihara is god, does that mean Yukimura is his son? How did THAT happen?

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crystalusagi December 28 2007, 09:21:38 UTC
Ah, Akaya, you cutie ♥

XDDD This was very enjoyable!

mmm, frappuccino

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pixxers December 28 2007, 13:41:54 UTC
I love little Kirikins. ♥ Thank you!

(If I weren't freezing, I'd want a frap today)

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reposoir December 28 2007, 16:33:48 UTC
Aw. Akaya and Starbucks might be a bad combo...the sugar...

But then maybe Yanagi won't mind. Red-eyed after a green tea frapp. Like Christmas!

Though I do have to ask, how much wax is Kirihara using if its hard to comb out sometimes? Because it shouldn't be hard at all....

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pixxers December 28 2007, 16:57:27 UTC
He'll be bouncing off the walls for hours. :D

I speak from experience, sadly. Going to bed with wax in your hair = tangled mess the next day.

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reposoir December 28 2007, 17:29:42 UTC
So was I. I went to bed with hair wax and woke up with a straight-hair fro, but it's a manageable fro.

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pixxers December 28 2007, 17:31:57 UTC
You must have really thick hair. Lucky bitch.

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