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Us of Three (Gen, PG)

Aug 04, 2006 00:09

Title: Us of Three
Rating: PG
Category: Gen oneshot
Word Count: 3662
Characters: Dean, Sam, and John
Spoilers: None
Summary: Pre-series. Sam grows up and leaves. Dean must choose where he belongs.
Author’s Notes: Written for prompt 10: Approach-Avoidance for the

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supernatural, oneshots, psych_30 challenge, fanfiction

Comments 34

why_me_why_not August 4 2006, 05:06:19 UTC

oh, poor Dean! the whole having to choose thing: It suddenly occurs to Dean like a punch that the three of them are breaking apart. He can feel it, and he knows he’s going to have to choose a side. Choose an “us.” The us that leaves Dad. The us that Sam leaves. and He did not choose Sam. But, he did not choose this. just about broke my heart!

Oh! I'm tired or I'd have something better to say, but I LOVE this!!

pixel_0 August 4 2006, 20:09:11 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! (See, this is the good reason why you kept that sociopath fic away from me. I could work on this without worrying about that pain in the butt sociopath. ;) )

And sleep, sleep! :D

apieceofcake August 4 2006, 09:04:35 UTC

Enjoyed it, thank you!

pixel_0 August 4 2006, 20:09:32 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm so glad to hear that! :)

embroiderama August 4 2006, 11:40:12 UTC

He did not choose this hollow ache that sits like a heavy pile of lead within his stomach. He did not choose the distance from here to California that will last for a longer time than they both expect. He did not choose this silence that has now enveloped his life.

Ah, Dean. He never did get a choice about any of the times his life has changed. Lovely story!

pixel_0 August 4 2006, 20:10:31 UTC

He never did get a choice about any of the times his life has changed.

Oh, I know. Poor guy. He just seems to get dragged along with life whether he wants to or not.

Thank you so much! :)

bona_fide_me August 4 2006, 12:13:38 UTC

You made me cry. Kudos.

pixel_0 August 4 2006, 20:11:38 UTC

Oh, I'm so sorry! *passes Kleenex* Take as many as you want.

Thank you so much for leaving feedback, though. I really appreciate it. :)

bona_fide_me August 26 2006, 11:59:13 UTC

So I'm tired, confused and frustrated at so many things at present - so I decided to go read my *memories* starting with this fic. :-)
You'd think I would've learnt my lesson and had the tissues next to me... alas, I did not.
*Takes another Kleenex*

strangeandcharm August 4 2006, 21:48:55 UTC

Funny, every time I read a fic like this I secretly hope Sam won't leave at the end. Logic and I don't really mix...

Loved it. Thank you.

pixel_0 August 6 2006, 00:43:48 UTC

Funny, every time I read a fic like this I secretly hope Sam won't leave at the end. Logic and I don't really mix...

It's okay, I hope the same thing too. At least for Dean's sake.

Thank you very much. :)