Only One (3/3)

[piplupz]

Title: Only One
Rating: NC-15
Pairing/characters: JongKey, Jonghyun, Key
Genre: fictional, fluff, unhappiness
Word count: 17,169
Summary: They had only saw each other in their eyes. They had only let each other convince them life was great. They had only got to love each other. At that time . . . Life was truly great.

Comments

[shineeapple]

I thought its going to be happy ending.but instead u making me cry:( omg this so good.i really enjoyed it.i love how u develop their relationship. It felt so real.thank u so much dear. Write more!;-)

[piplupz]

I'm sorry to make you cry! D:
If you want to, we can blame BoA for making such a sad song!
But I'm very glad you still enjoyed it.
Thank you for the comment! I legit love you for it! c:

[shineeapple]

i certainly will wait for u to write another happy ending jongkey:D

[itsjustjodie]

THAT'S THE END?????
ARE YOU FUCKING SERIOUS??????
NOOOO, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
WTF IS THIS?????
THIS ISN'T THE REALITY I WANTEDDDDDD NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
omggggg this, omg nooo
I'm deadasss crying cause this is the endddd, noooooo omgggg
and i was exploding with cutenesss with the 2 whole parts before...
YOU'RE SOO FUCKING MEANNNNNN T.T
JongKey....... :''(

[piplupz]

Aw, I'm so sorry to really disappoint you and totally corrupt your feels at the same time!
That's why I /did/ put 'unhappiness' in the genre title.
I don't mean to make anyone cry; but I guess at the same time I like the fact I did pull a tug of emotion.
I'M SORRY I'M SO MEAN, OKAY? BUT I'LL MAKE IT UP TO YOU. I HAVE A JONGKEY MINI-FIC THAT'LL COME A WHILE FROM NOW. IT'S HAPPY-DAPPY AND YOU'LL BE HAPPIER WITH IT. C:
Thank you for the comment. <3

[itsjustjodie]

I really am disappointed, but on the other note,
this was really good though, even when it had an ending like that, this was really, really good,
I was soo disappointed because it really felt soo real, and it's like watching to people that supposed to be together break each other up,
but really, this was soo amazing :)

[chibiyoko]

O my god nooooooo. Noooo they went separate ways and my heart is broken now. They should go back to how they used to be. ;; /tears
Even tho, I really like this story of yours. ^^ It's easily readable and I love your writing style. But seriously tho, I will just imagine there is another part 4 where they got back together somehow. Kekekekeke~ Can't help it. Good job ^___^

[piplupz]

I'm sorry I broke your heart! I'll find a way to mend it. C:
I'm sorry that there isn't a part four. I actually /did/ want to put them back together, but this is supposed to revolve around BoA's Only One, so I was keeping to the song. Plus the fact I wouldn't even know how to write them back together.
But, you can think what you want to. I could assume these two might just bump into each other again and just spill that they weren't with their 'partners' anymore.
Thank you for reading~ <3

[hitoshisakurai]

Oh my God, why, just why, now I'm just going to weep in my bed while trying to fall asleep thinking that they both realized how stupid it was of them to lie and that in the end they got together and and excuse me while I cry, I just can't deal with it, so many years passed and they still can't get over each other, and yet they're too scared to admit that and look, I just wrote one long sentence and it still goes on and I'm still crying and I KNOW THAT THEY GOT TOGETHER AFTER THAT ANYWAYS.
Thank you for writing that, I needed some story of a perfect love in my life, you know? ;~~;

[piplupz]

Oh my God, I'm so sorry that I wrote them this way so you can try falling asleep thinking about how stupid I made them and you having to imagine them being back together, that must be so stressful and I take full responsibility, oh they're so stupid aren't they for lying to each other, tsk tsk tsk, oh look, I wrote a run on that doesn't make sense just for your sake and OH BUT THE REALITY IS THAT THEY WILL NEVER COME BACK TOGETHER.
No, thank you for reading! All the /readers/ are perfect in my life! Like I've said before, I have more JongKey plans, and they don't have this kind of ending. c:

[hitoshisakurai]

Hahahaha, it's okay, I just got too emotional, it's actually amazing when fics aren't all about fluff and rainbows and happy-ever-afters and are more about real life which is not always perfect... Realism is something I really value in fics, so, actually in some masochistic kind of way I love the fact that they won't, as you just said to shatter my heart (><), come back together.
Well. I shouldn't complain because actually I break them all the time in my fics xD Okay, maybe not all the time but pretty often. So I shouldn't complain.
REALISM FTW. And I should not let my moodiness make me write stupid comments xD
Can't wait to read more of your JongKey then! ;D

[plainjanesbro]

No happy ending? Not gonna read but maybe one day I will muster the inner strength to read it and all the other fics that have sad endings. ;__;

[piplupz]

I'm sorry you can't read sad fics.
The first two parts are happy-dappy fluff, so feel free to read those if you wanted to.
I'm here for when you muster the courage to read it. ;)
Thank you for the comment! <3