THE GAZETTE: URUHA.KAI: The Car Park

[cateris]

Title: The car park
Author: cateris
Characters: Uruha, Kai (The Gazette)
Rating: G
Summary: So for him it was more than surprising that, in the situation they were dealing with, Kai was so silent.
Disclaimer: The events and characters depicted in the following piece of work are completely fictitious. Even though similarities with the members of The

Comments

[kawasakininja]

Beautiful, slightly haunting atmosphere really comes out listening to the song while reading this. I just noticed it's not really a pairing story, just Kai and just Uruha story, still I can't help but get a certain feeling because of the way you described their actions. Kai was tired but he also seemed slightly tense and withdrawn trapped like there with Uruha. Uruha just seemed, well like Uruha, simple, but pensive (I don't know if it's the right description). Overall great characterization, I think you really nailed Kai there. Those two have quite opposite personalities, but they have a certain charm together.

[cateris]

Heee! I was so happy to read, the day you replied to me, that you also listened to the song while reading this :) Yep. It is haunting. Its this idea I have about really big and empty spaces and the psychological impact that involuntarily has over our minds.

Yes, indeed it's not actually a pairing story. That's why in the description I wrote them separately. If I ever continued this story, maybe this would have been the prologue for the "how Kai and Uruha got together" story. More exact, "how Uruha realized he was falling in love with Kai", chaptered fic. And from that point I would have decided what Kai might felt about this whole thing, in chapters :) But this is just me rambling, and it will never happen, lol. I have plenty of time to write them and to pull them in different situations.

[kawasakininja]

But this is just me rambling, and it will never happen, lol.
Yes, ideas are like that. You don't always use them. But I do look forward to more UruhaxKai from you, when you do write more. Fandom needs more good UruhaxKai stories :)

[cateris]

Heee! I actually have more Kai/Uruha. It's a oneshot that stands on hold since February 13 when I wrote it. Waits to be translated. The Car Park actually is my second Kai/Uruha story :). Was easier to post it sooner because this very drabble was created now, when I 100% write completely in English all my stories, so sis does nothing more than beta them/change the phrases' topic and all that.

That's the sad part with my old unposted stories. THEY NEED TO BE TRANSLATED AND MAKE IT SOUND ENGLISH ENOUGH :). And for that I'm depending on sis, and in time and with patience they'll see the light of the day. *laughs* I'm not trying to get over dramatic now :D

P.S.: actually, today I wanted to ask her one more time to beta that Kai/Uruha one and I might actually succeed ;)

ON ANOTHER NOTE: Hey you! ;) *waves*

[soundofrespire]

It was a very beautiful setting. Had a really cool and lovely feeling to it <3

And btw, that movie mentioned, is it "I Am Legend"? XD

[cateris]

Thank you so much for reading and commenting ;)

:) Nope. It was 28 days later, THE ONE MOVIE THAT I MOSTLY ADORE AND I THINK IT'S THE BEST AMONG ITS GENRE! :D

...but coming to think of...I understand why you thought of I am legend (saw that too! I'M A SUCKER FOR THESE KIND OF MOVIES, HAHA). English is not my first language and I admit, I didn't express myself quite accurately there. I should have explain better how they became beasts, as in a psychological behavior way and not that they turned into monsters (aka IAL).

[soundofrespire]

Nono, you explained it rather well. But I haven't seen 28 Days Later. Only I Am Legend, probably why I thought it was that one XD

[fairydrop]

I liked it very much. It was well written. I liked the atmosphere of it. Sorry I couldn't listen to the music, I'm fed up with that song, but I tried...! XD

Thank you for the fic!

[cateris]

No prob, no prob ;) Glad you read this and that you actually left a comment. That's always nice :D

[ultimatecircus]

I really adore this pairing; the way you wrote it has a type of atmosphere that kind of makes you feel alone with the characters but still feel a bit safe since you have them there with you (well..since they're with each other anyway). The picture really helped with the visual and the descriptions you provided (the hookers, the flickering neon sign and the sound that I swear I could hear) took this story above and beyond.

The way that Uruha seemed to remember the conversation he had with Kai and the questions he wanted to ask him really made me see if, despite what Uruha really knew deep down in side, that he was slowly beginning to care for Kai in a deeper sense than just friendship. The ending line helped closed the story smoothly as well.

I truly enjoyed this fanfic and I want to say that this was an amazing job well done!

[cateris]

*smiles* Thank you so much, hun. I remember reading your comment the day you replied. Made me insanely happy. You actually understood the fic and where I was trying to get with all my descriptions and little details. You actually understood Uruha and all his more/or less conscientious feelings for Kai. Glad you were able to see behind the words and the images.

I also want to add that your comment specifically brings so much honor to me. I really love how you write, and how you write Kai/Uruha. I also checked your LJ to see if you upped something new, but I saw you didn't. Once more I bring my excitement to tell you how much I wait for another work from you ;)

[cateris]

Thank you for your lovely words and that you liked the story ;). Yes, I totally love descripting things in little details. I think that's important, and personally that's the one technique I always love to use in my writings.