oo nice, i can feel the anger from yuri whenever tiff talks about jessica. and i felt that all hope is gone when yuri said that it was all a wasted time on tiff wow nice going! i have been feeling a bit like yuri and a bit like tiff this week...so i guess i really got hooked on this.
I'm glad the the emotions were easy to understand, though I'm sorry it was a bit of a reminder of your personal life. Then again, we all go through this kind of ordeal, right? It will make you stronger in the end, though. =) Things will get better, my friend.
And, thank you so much for coming by and reading. <3
wow...i really liked that one...it felt so...visual. Everything seemed to fit the mood. It sort of made me wish to see this in the form of a graphic novel, but then, if that were the case, I wouldn't be able to experience the imagery and descriptions, especially the way you lingered over certain parts
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It's Slangsty! :D I'd like to say why there are sluttish aspects to this... but I feel if I reveal them here, there might be a few angered or confused people LOL. (Em, you better know wth I'm talkin' about.)
Haha... I've talked to you about Tiff's vocabulary but since this was AU, I figured to let it slide in Em's piece. Plus, I get this sort of "sophisticated" Tiffany image when I picture her smoking, in a bar, with a quiet Yuri.
____ You already know what I think Em :p Haha and glad you liked the title suggestion. Though, I think my OTHER suggestion (GIRLS GONE WILD!) would have been just as appropriate.
Yes! I think it's a first for this pairing? I really needed to get some angst out, and it just happened to be these two, whether it really fit or not. (Actually, I think angst fits Tiffany quite well.)
I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the story. It is a very familiar emotion that we can all connect to, so I'm glad that the readers are able to do so with this piece. <3
I love how in the first part, although Yuri didn't say anything you could clearly feel what she was going through. Especially when Tiffany declines a night together; I actually winced at that. Also, the background Jeti angst was great.
Foolish Games is always an amazing angst-spiration, y/y?
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and i felt that all hope is gone when yuri said that it was all a wasted time on tiff
wow nice going!
i have been feeling a bit like yuri and a bit like tiff this week...so i guess i really got hooked on this.
thanks for sharing!
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And, thank you so much for coming by and reading. <3
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Haha... I've talked to you about Tiff's vocabulary but since this was AU, I figured to let it slide in Em's piece. Plus, I get this sort of "sophisticated" Tiffany image when I picture her smoking, in a bar, with a quiet Yuri.
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You already know what I think Em :p Haha and glad you liked the title suggestion. Though, I think my OTHER suggestion (GIRLS GONE WILD!) would have been just as appropriate.
-sLaVe3
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though i do have to agree, the title works quite well...despite the fact that i do not condone smoking...only soshi getting it on XD
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When I suggested Ashes it had a deeper meaning than just cigarettes. ...And now I'm totally blankin on what that was. Maybe Em still has it XD
-sLaVe3
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I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed the story. It is a very familiar emotion that we can all connect to, so I'm glad that the readers are able to do so with this piece. <3
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ok, maybe just AU!Fany.
*tries to picture the girls smoking*
O___o
Every1 be hatin' smokin'.
Me like. -___-;
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Foolish Games is always an amazing angst-spiration, y/y?
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I have to admit, I winced a bit, too, haha. And, yeah, JeTi is very sneaky, always getting in there somewhere... *sighs*
Anything that represents old-school Jewel is angsty and ftw!
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