One-shot: Hide and Seek

Aug 07, 2011 02:30

Title: Hide and seek
Pairing: Ryo, Ueda
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: (temporarily) blind Ryo, !AU
Summary: Ueda hires Ryo to help him with a few songs on his album. When Ryo shows up, he is unable to see. Will Ueda still work with him? Will Ryo be able to deal while he waits things out?
Notes: 8906 words, written for prompt no. 15 of Ryoda-thon. I ( Read more... )

!au, !cross-over, r: pg-13, lenght: one-shot, p: ryo/ueda

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goldfreckled August 10 2011, 23:55:27 UTC
I know you've been insecure about your writing-abilities recently, but I think this fic shows so much just how brilliant you are at telling stories, at setting the mood. It's so easy to read this and feel with Ryo and omg, I know I told you this already, but having him only temporarily blind is perfect here and the end, the end *__________*

I don't think I could quote a favourite part if I tried, because this flows so nicely and everything's just so lovely. ♥♥

Jin is perfect here, his caring side but also the teasing, and Ryo-- I was pretty much squealing at the screen. Awesome. Really, just awesome. :3

I'm so happy you picked this prompt, this kind of plotty romance is really made for you. *_______*

♥♥

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sashjun August 11 2011, 18:25:20 UTC
*blushes* I like being told I tell stories well so really no words :3 and again I´m so relieved you didn´t actually mind me twisting that prompt that way because I personally felt like it might be cheating a little.

ahaha Jin, I wasn´t sure who to use or how and if to use more people and idek how it ended up with Jin but he will do as long as he didn´t seem too random in there.

I´m kind of glad I did pick it too. It was definitely a new experience for me. And I totally did it because of your explanation, so <3



Yeah thank you for encouraging me so much!

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fancyann1974 August 14 2011, 13:22:02 UTC
i love this story
so full of feelings, so touching, and wonderful
thank you so much for sharing

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sashjun September 4 2011, 19:54:48 UTC
ah, I am glad it came out like that. Thanks for reading!

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arashifan27 August 15 2011, 06:03:52 UTC
WOW. Just wow.
This is such a good fic i dont even know what to say. I wish i could write like u. T.T
one of the best fics i ever read!
Thx for sharing such an amazing story! ^_^

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sashjun September 4 2011, 19:55:40 UTC
Ah I am honored you liked it that much! But you know, each of us has a different style ;D

Thanks for reading!

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nisanoaozora September 22 2011, 20:32:31 UTC
read this a while ago, but didnt have time to comment, sorry :(
i remember it was breakfast and it made me cry T_T this is beautifully written, I love it, so much ^^
will reread this ^^

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nisanoaozora September 22 2011, 21:01:49 UTC
i have a favor to ask, can i PM you?
it's about fic and ryoda-thon and i dont know who else to ask

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sashjun September 22 2011, 21:09:49 UTC
first of all, thanks for the comment, even this late it made me really happy.

Second of all, sure you can ask me (I can not promise the result obviously), but PM me or write to the official ryoda_love email, since it is community related.

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museelo September 10 2012, 18:30:16 UTC
ooooh this was really nice :3

thank you for this :D

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sashjun September 10 2012, 21:08:04 UTC
Haha, you are making me revisit older things, what on earth have I even written >.<

Anyway, glad you thought so. Thank you!

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