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One-shot: Hide and Seek

Aug 07, 2011 02:30

Title: Hide and seek
Pairing: Ryo, Ueda
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: (temporarily) blind Ryo, !AU
Summary: Ueda hires Ryo to help him with a few songs on his album. When Ryo shows up, he is unable to see. Will Ueda still work with him? Will Ryo be able to deal while he waits things out?
Notes: 8906 words, written for prompt no. 15 of Ryoda-thon. I ( Read more... )

!au, !cross-over, r: pg-13, lenght: one-shot, p: ryo/ueda

Comments 30

kitsune_hikaru August 7 2011, 13:08:25 UTC

i'm not an ophthalmologist but i do know as far as the retinal detachment it took some time and rehydration to make it attach again so the owner can see, but it still needs more care as it might have rebound effect... not sure... that is as far as i can remember... lol~~ damn, i should read more...n wow, i really enjoyed this~~ XD ( ... )

sashjun August 7 2011, 16:17:27 UTC

Yeah I researche it but it does not take too long and you can see at lest something in the process . . .

I am always so happy to hear my fics are able to make people feel emotions and the happenings, the aches or the happiness. <3

Well, I was just lazy to post in comments because it would be like 12 of them so I am happy people seem to like it. :D

THANKS A LOT!

journal_chaos August 7 2011, 17:46:09 UTC

Wow, I love this story a lot!
It's such a good prgress developed in my opinion!
Thank you for sharing!

sashjun August 8 2011, 17:08:59 UTC

I'm happy the progress didn't feel too rushed. Thanks!

fumiko_pyon August 7 2011, 18:08:59 UTC

<3<3<3<3
The story & their interaction were going very well..
I really like the way they built their relationship and thrust.. Ueda was always there to assure him..
Thanks for sharing~ ^^
*hugsss & heartsss*

sashjun August 8 2011, 17:09:30 UTC

Thank you for pointing out what you think went well in the fic <3

snow_meow August 8 2011, 17:05:32 UTC

I don't know why but I feel like this fic is just different.
Not your usual style.

It took me sometimes to understand the ending.
I wasn't sure if Ryo in the end has his sight again when he meets Ueda until I read the ending part again.

By the way has Ueda met Ryo before Ryo lost his sight?
This part is unclear to me.

sashjun August 8 2011, 17:11:54 UTC

Really? I don't know about the style, but the theme is definitely different.

Yes Ryo is slowly getting his sight back and he can see when he meets Ueda again.

Ueda saw Ryo recording in a studio, but they never met face to face. He just liked his guitar skill so that is why he hired him. I hope that now I cleared up all the misunderstandings <3

rabyuu August 8 2011, 17:45:33 UTC

i managed to read this at last!!!