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M.A.R.Y.S.U.E. Must Die!

Jan 19, 2007 00:40

Title: M.A.R.Y.S.U.E. Must Die! (1974)
Wordcount: ~13000
Rating: T
Genre: Crack!Fic
Characters: Madeleine Yaxley (OC), Maggie Lewis (OC), Marvola Arwen Raevyn Yvette Salazara Umekiko Elfynchyld (OC), Sorting Hat, Remus Lupin, Sirius Black, James Potter, Peter Pettigrew, Lily Evans, Louisa Chambers (OC), Minerva McGonagall, Albus Dumbledore, ( Read more... )

reviews, gen, au, original characters, maggie lewis, fic: marysue must die, madeleine yaxley, peter pettigrew, humour

Comments 62

chiv January 19 2007, 06:19:57 UTC

Oooo, what could it be? What could it be?

Of course I already know, but I still can't wait.
A nice way to introduce the girls though.

pica_scribit January 19 2007, 23:05:40 UTC

Thanks. I actually wanted to start the story with the introduction of the 'Sue, but then this little scene popped into my head, and I thought it might be nice to give a little bit of background on the characters. So I've titled this section "Perfectly Pointless Prologue" and called it good. I've done a little editing since last night and added 200+ words, so it's a little more filled out than it was.

tiggothy January 19 2007, 06:27:36 UTC

*squee*

*loves*

*wants to know more*

pica_scribit January 19 2007, 23:07:46 UTC

Oh, you will soon know more than you ever wanted to! I edited the chapter a bit and posted it to my webpage, so you might take another glance at it before reading the next one.

elanor_two January 19 2007, 07:28:36 UTC

This is adorable...

pica_scribit January 19 2007, 23:11:46 UTC

Thanks! It should hit "hilarious" sometime in the next chapter.

cyn_ful January 19 2007, 15:44:39 UTC

haha...off to a good start

pica_scribit January 19 2007, 23:12:47 UTC

*grin* Thanks! I just did an edit, since I wrote the chapter in the middle of the night. I've added around 200 words to it and made a few other changes as well. I've also realised it is in no way necessary to the overall plot of the fic. *sigh*

cyn_ful January 21 2007, 00:14:28 UTC

haha...i shall have to re-read it now

Perfectly Pointless Prologue pica_scribit January 19 2007, 22:38:47 UTC

Comment here for Perfectly Pointless Prologue.

Re: Perfectly Pointless Prologue tea_elle January 20 2007, 20:56:16 UTC

lol! dis iz great! rite moore plz!

haha, yeah, seriously, though, so far, nice job. I can tell already that these poor Suethors won't know what hit them. Poor, poor, well-meaning girls....Anyway, I don't think I've ever read any of your fics before; you have a really good style. It's quick enough that I don't feel like I want them to get up and go already, but you give enough detail that I already know who the characters are.

Oh, and thanks for the link! *gives e-cookies as promised*

Re: Perfectly Pointless Prologue pica_scribit January 20 2007, 21:03:41 UTC

Thanks! I'm really pleased that you are enjoying it so far. I didn't intend for the story to start there, but with the introduction of the actual Sue. Ah, well; she'll be there in the next chapter. Thank you for cookies!