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M.A.R.Y.S.U.E. Must Die!

Jan 19, 2007 00:40

Title: M.A.R.Y.S.U.E. Must Die! (1974)
Wordcount: ~13000
Rating: T
Genre: Crack!Fic
Characters: Madeleine Yaxley (OC), Maggie Lewis (OC), Marvola Arwen Raevyn Yvette Salazara Umekiko Elfynchyld (OC), Sorting Hat, Remus Lupin, Sirius Black, James Potter, Peter Pettigrew, Lily Evans, Louisa Chambers (OC), Minerva McGonagall, Albus Dumbledore, ( Read more... )

reviews, gen, au, original characters, maggie lewis, fic: marysue must die, madeleine yaxley, peter pettigrew, humour

Comments 62

Marvola pica_scribit January 22 2007, 07:56:38 UTC

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Re: Marvola tiggothy January 23 2007, 15:14:59 UTC

*falls over giggling* (or rather, I would have fallen off the sofa were I at home. As it is, I'm stealing school internets & so have to keep my giggles to a discreet minimum)

...that was just what I needed after today's lessons... though thanks for the warning about defamation of the English language ;-)

and ooOOOOOOoooooPeter!

Re: Marvola pica_scribit January 23 2007, 16:37:21 UTC

Heh. Thanks! For some reason, I really enjoy giving Peter a little positive screen time, and a little action. Maybe because he really gets the shaft in the fanfic world, and I definitely don't believe that young!Peter deserves such treatment.

Re: Marvola elanor_two January 24 2007, 00:15:12 UTC

Her eyes glowed the purple of bad prose.

I think I died right there. This is hilarious! Marvola's dialogue is almost impossible to read, it's so crazy...

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Glamour pica_scribit January 22 2007, 07:56:57 UTC

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Re: Glamour elanya January 24 2007, 04:08:12 UTC

I think they should call her 'Marv' ;)

This is quite amusing - are you only planning 4 secions? i.e. are you almost done? ;)

Re: Glamour pica_scribit January 24 2007, 04:18:59 UTC

Theoretically. This character is really exhausting to write. I can't imagine how some people manage to write like this all the time. Either Madeleine is going to kill her, or they're going to have to come up with a more creative solution. I guess we'll see.... :p

I thought about "Marv", but I have heard for Fanfiction.net referred to as "the pit of voles", and I wanted to give a sort of nod to that.

Re: Glamour elanya January 24 2007, 04:23:48 UTC

Hee. Maybe Peter can call her Marv. I think he deserves his shot at her too ;)

The other thing I wonder is, knowing you ship r/s, how many hot showers Remus is going to have to take after he is free of her in order to feel clean again D: Poor Maggie!

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The D.T.U.C. pica_scribit January 22 2007, 07:57:26 UTC

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Re: The D.T.U.C. elanya February 1 2007, 22:21:28 UTC

Brava, well done! :D A fun little crack-filled romp with some good writing advice and good use of character. It's like the Praetzellis books only for fic instead of theory, and better use of narrative-as-instruction ;p

Re: The D.T.U.C. pica_scribit February 1 2007, 22:28:34 UTC

*bows* Thank you! I really wish Praetzellis had been better at that; I think I would have retained a lot more theory.

Re: The D.T.U.C. tiggothy February 1 2007, 22:57:10 UTC

I love and adore this in so many ways... the footnotes, Humphrey Bogart, the fact it's a bloody good story and, yeah... *brain fizzle*

Thank you for writing, posting & sharing :-)

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lyndagb January 23 2007, 12:27:23 UTC

*cackle*

Oh yes, she really really really must die...!

(If only because that writing gives me such a headache.)

Tres amusant.

Marvola pica_scribit January 23 2007, 16:38:52 UTC

Heh. I am trying to balance it, since writing that way gives me a headache, too. I want her to be a properly awful and horrifying character, but I want people to keep reading and not be completely put off either.

vampiryyn March 31 2007, 23:16:24 UTC

Actually "Seaux" would be pronounced "Soh," not "Sue," which really messed with my head while I was reading this. XD

pica_scribit April 2 2007, 03:39:21 UTC

I know.