[1028] Act II, Scene I

[phoenix_melody]

Because obviously I should be writing zombie fic instead of going to bed. A little short on action, though I hope it's more than adequate for tension. Also unbeta'd like all the rest because I'm still telling myself this is something I'll get over.

Original drabble by askerian

Act IAct II
Scene I, Sasuke
Scene I, Naruto
Scene II, Shikamaru
Scene II,

Comments

[flourite_roses]

WHUT WHUT WHUT. Neji is motion sick? I get that too sometimes. Or even worse, Neji is going to turn.

[phoenix_melody]

You'll have to find out~ ♥ Thanks for commenting!

[flourite_roses]

ahaha, why did I expect that answer? XD okok I'll wait for you. :3

[flourite_roses]

btw, forgot to say, I like that part about Sakura. I can see the angst coming through. You know, the part where Tenten talks to her and Sakura is still fiddling with the axe in an axe-murderer way. And then Tenten's all wary when Sakura answers. I ♥ that.

[chromde]

"Then he fell to his knees and very messily started puking up his guts." Considering this is a zombie AU, I'm worried I should be taking that line literally. D: I'm not, am I?

Neji! I hope he's just sick from a the concussion.

I love how you handled all their interactions. The awkwardness of the lap sitting really added a touch of a realism to everything, and the fact that they're not all getting along.

Also, I totally adored the discussion about zombie plans. xD Hee!

Great addition! :D

[phoenix_melody]

...no, you're not, but that made me laugh so hard. ♥ As for what's wrong with Neji, you'll have to wait for another part to see.

I enjoyed including the awkwardness and the tension--they're still teenagers, despite the zombie apocalypse.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[phoenix_melody]

Act II, Scene II with Sasuke

[hiza_chan]

Oh no! I really hope he's sick just from a concussion or something. It's been so long I can't remember if there were hints about him getting bitten. Mm, I'm so glad you're still writing this! ♥

[phoenix_melody]

I'm kinda glad I'm still writing it, too. It's been a nice break from stressful work-related stuff. Thanks for still reading!

[phoenix_melody]

Act II, Scene II with Sasuke

[rurounitriv]

Ack. I can't remember what the symptoms of zombie-sickness were.

Although considering the conversation they've been having, it could just be that what's been going on just kicked Neji in the gut and he's reacting to that.

[kitty11chan]

Flu-like symptoms.

[rurounitriv]

...yep, nausea would qualify there. Ack.

[phoenix_melody]

Act II, Scene II with Sasuke

[kitty11chan]

Concussion-sickness, most likely. He didn't get bitten, & as I recall, concussions tend to make you nauseous.

[tephralynn]

Not bitten, but open wound that he's been touching and a whole lot of zombie gore flying while they were bashing heads in. I'm hoping for a concussion and the motion of the car but the possibility of zombification is there. :(

[phoenix_melody]

Interesting theory. ♥ Thanks for reading and commenting!

[phoenix_melody]

Act II, Scene II with Sasuke