[1028] Act II, Scene I

[phoenix_melody]

Because obviously I should be writing zombie fic instead of going to bed. A little short on action, though I hope it's more than adequate for tension. Also unbeta'd like all the rest because I'm still telling myself this is something I'll get over.

Original drabble by askerian

Act IAct II
Scene I, Sasuke
Scene I, Naruto
Scene II, Shikamaru
Scene II,

Comments

[lexkixass]

Very spiffy~

Concussion-induced nausea. Not fun at all.

[phoenix_melody]

Glad it got your approval! ^-^

[askerian]

i love sasuke's bitchiness and sakura waking up kinda and omgneji? i like that sasuke reacts to the sickness thing with a moment of fear. prrt. >3

also, naruto is love. u.u good pov.

[phoenix_melody]

Sasuke is not nearly as calm as he pretends to be. Sakura should be waking up more in a while, and Neji...well, he's busy vomiting, he'll get back to you on that. XD

Glad you liked the Naruto POV! ♥

[phoenix_melody]

Since you were not awake when I finished, here you go! ♥

Scene II with Sasuke & Scene III with Tenten

[rosalui]

I love it! AND OMG NEJI. D8 PLEASE BE OKAY.

[phoenix_melody]

Glad to hear it! Thanks for commenting. ♥

[phoenix_melody]

Act II, Scene II with Sasuke

OMG! I LOVE YOU

[anonymous]

Please don't let this be something you get over! I love these so much I'll have a heart attack if you stop now!! <3 They're so cool!!! Everybody is wonderfully in character, and (I just read these all today in one go) I still can't get over how awesome-sauce Tenten is/has been! I also love the lines about Sakura in here, and how she's creeping everybody out by caressing her axe. At least she hasn't gone fully crazy yet.

On a sidenote, I'm really hoping Neji isn't dead or dying (I don't remember him being bitten......)

I love these!!! :D

Re: OMG! I LOVE YOU

[phoenix_melody]

Thank you for reading and commenting, anonymous person! I'm quite pleased you've enjoyed Tenten and Sakura--I'm enjoying writing them. ^-^

If you don't mind me asking, how did you find me? :o

[ithilgwath]

Brrr, this is good. Darn you good writer-types luring me read zombie fics that creep me the hell out. *sigh* It's my own fault, I know... i have no self-control. But gods, this is so good!

And considering this story has not given us the story of how the zombiefication started... I'm worried about Neji. I hope he's just getting sick from being knocked in the head, bleeding everywhere, and the general horror of their situation.

Now I shall wait patiently with my bokken at the ready for the next chapter. ^^;

[phoenix_melody]

Zombies creep me out, too. But they're fun things to throw at characters! Glad to hear that you're enjoying this! I haven't written anything for the next scene yet, but I think I've finally settled on a POV. We'll see.

Thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

[phoenix_melody]

Act II, Scene II with Sasuke