[1017] Are you really all that surprised?

[phoenix_melody]

Original drabble by askerian

Act IAct II
Scene I, Sasuke
Scene I, Naruto
Scene II, Shikamaru
Scene II, Sasuke
Scene III, Neji
Scene III, Tenten
Scene IV, Tenten
Scene IV, Sakura
Scene V, Lee

Comments

[chibidrunksanzo]

You are very mean and evil to end it there. Well done! XD

[phoenix_melody]

I'm glad you approve of my evilness? XD Thanks for commenting!

[phoenix_melody]

And here's a Lee!sequel.

[lexkixass]

Agreeing with the evil to end it there. XD Great tension. Definitely had me hooked to keep wanting to know what happens next, and not just because NejiTen is my OTP.

Very awesome! I will still hope for more, because this has been oh-so lovely. But if this is the last, it's not a bad place to stop. Sometimes the cliffhanger is better than a conclusion.

[phoenix_melody]

Huzzah, you think my tension is great! \o/ Stupid action scenes, how I loathe thee. Thanks for all the commenting you've been doing.

Right now I'm not sure if I'll keep going. I'd actually need, you know, a plot if I were to continue. >.>;

[lexkixass]

The action scenes were great. :3

And bah. Plot. Who needs it? /kidding

No, I totally get that. But the PWP you did had a great run~ :D

[phoenix_melody]

Glad you think so! ^-^

Calling this a PWP makes it sound scandalous. >.>

[rurounitriv]

ACK! You can't leave it there, we need to know if Tenten is going to go zombie on them in the middle of the night!

[phoenix_melody]

We'll have to see. XD Thanks for reading and commenting!

[phoenix_melody]

And here's a Lee!sequel.

[flourite_roses]

“Stop whining and get the hell out of your car, Hyuuga, or I’m going to let these suckers eat you.”

I laughed too. :D But on to more pressing matters, OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGTENTEN!!! GAH, YOU THERE, YOU MUST HAVE GUTS; I'LL BITE YOU TOO. TENTENTENTENTENTENTENTEN!! GAH! MY TENTEN!

You have great talent for writing tension-anticipation scenes. I almost hate you for it. I WILL NOT SLEEP THIS NIGHT FOR THE WORRY OF HER. T^T TENTENNNNNNNN. I don't want her to turn! I don't want them to kill her either! NOOOOOOOOOOOO...!!!

[phoenix_melody]

Good, I'm glad you laughed. ♥ Thanks for the compliments--we'll have to see if any further zombie inspiration shows up. ♥

[phoenix_melody]

And here's a Lee!sequel.

[flourite_roses]

Awesomeeeeeeeeee.

[questofdreams]

OH MAN... Tenten! Gah, I hope you haven't zombied yourself out, but... seriously, how would this ever be resolved? @_@

It's brilliant as it is as well, but I do hope you come back to this some time! I really loved it!

[phoenix_melody]

Thanks for your comments and encouragement--they brightened up my day at work. As for more...we'll have to see. ♥

[kitty11chan]

Wave it at Askerian; maybe she can add some more.

[phoenix_melody]

And here's a Lee!sequel.