And, yeah, though, it may be more out of obligation than anything. It's not like he has much choice. Though, he does trust a little more than he did before, I guess~
I feel so bad for Kame. I mean, he's had such a hard life it seems. But I think he's not beyond saving, considering that he seems in some tiny way willing to accept help from Koki. It means he's not entirely beyond connecting with others after all.
He's had it hard but I guess he's pretty tough deep down inside. And, to be fair, he either had the choice of trusting Koki or standing about and bleeding. Hm. :/
Right? Kame should be okay in terms of that wound from here on~
I'm glad, too, to be honest! This was the first plot for a KAT-TUN fic I ever managed to properly formulate in my brain and I'm not letting myself leave it unfinished! I have an awful habit for leaving things hanging >< I won't let it happen this time~
Ah, I'm just paranoid since I was always being told to stop using so much dialogue in stories I wrote in Primary school. Bloody teachers broke me ;P
I've ended up changing certain aspects of the plot in my head but...that's not anything bad seeing as those parts of the plot aren't directly affected by the beginning too much~
dialogue is a funny thing; i think maybe the avoidance of it is to try and keep from making it sound too... much like an information dump? it's hard to explain. X3
Yeah, that's true...but, I think my teachers just wanted me to focus on writing narrative bits more than dialogue. I wasn't trying to learn at that time, though, I just wanted to write stories xD
I'm glad I'm back! I felt so stupid for taking so long xDDD
It's a cheery contrast to the rest of that stuff...we need some nice stuff every so often~ And, well, Koki's just a nice guy. Somehow, he felt Kame needed help~
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Love the chappie.
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And, yeah, though, it may be more out of obligation than anything. It's not like he has much choice. Though, he does trust a little more than he did before, I guess~
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Anyways, thanks for the update!
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I didn't mind the dialouges. I'm glad that you found the time to continu writing this fic. Writer's block can be so very cruel, I know that. ^^
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I'm glad, too, to be honest! This was the first plot for a KAT-TUN fic I ever managed to properly formulate in my brain and I'm not letting myself leave it unfinished! I have an awful habit for leaving things hanging >< I won't let it happen this time~
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also it's okay that it took forever; i got hit with real life and less-words for this year as well. >.<
looking forward to see what happens. :D
happy late new year to you, too <3<3<3
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I've ended up changing certain aspects of the plot in my head but...that's not anything bad seeing as those parts of the plot aren't directly affected by the beginning too much~
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oh.. I loved how this chap ended in a light smile <3
Very curious to know why Koki got so fond with Kazuya :O
Have a happy new year :D
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It's a cheery contrast to the rest of that stuff...we need some nice stuff every so often~
And, well, Koki's just a nice guy. Somehow, he felt Kame needed help~
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