Aftermath (ten/jack, nc-17)

[phinnia]

Title: aftermath
Author: phinnia
Prompt: kiss_bingo: 'back'
Disclaimer: A wandering minstrel I, a thing of shreds and patches. I own nothing.
Rating: NC-17 for m/m sex
Pairing: ten/jack
Spoilers: none
Warnings: none

Comments

[silvermoon07]

Aw, this was so sweet and so sad and wonderfully brilliant and so very sexy all at once.

Poor Jack being shot like that, and dying in the Ten's arms, and poor Ten, having to witness yet another death of his beloved. You really captured all of Ten's anguish and angst, and how he just wanted to give Jack pleasure and let him know how much he loved him. I simply adore the way you write the two of them, it's so refreshing and beautiful. Ten really does have the most gorgeous oral fixations, and I loved how he finished Jack off with that pretty mouth of his.

Jack was so adorable the way he just lay back and happily let Ten take the lead for once. It was so cute the way Ten curled up against Jack, feeling totally sated and happy, and fell asleep listening to his human heart beating. That was so poetic and so poignant.

Thank you so much for another fantastic fic, sweetie, I really loved this one very much, and I've saved it to my memories so I can enjoy it over and over.

[dshael]

Love the way you put your words together in this one. I read this: "Then the tension falls beautifully from the Doctor's shoulders as he comes, crying out in melodic, broken Gallifreyan." several times over, it was just so pretty. ;)

[yamx]

AWWWWW. I love it when they hold each other up like this. And I love how Jack's death hit the Doctor harder than him.

[navaan]

I always love stories that deal with the Doctor's reactions to Jack's different deaths. And this was sexy and touching all at once.

[maldeluxx]

I agree, images might be very haunting even if you know Jack's going to be fine later *hugs both* <3