Can anybody stop this thing?

[philomel]

Ayune como esperanza
LOTR RPS
Monortensen
R-ish
Beta-less! *feels nekkid*
(As a result, am v. open to constructive criticism.)
For shirasade’s Inspiration challenge, though not a typical songfic per se

Comments

[cuppa_joe]

Genius. This is perfect. Probably among my three very favorite pieces. I love the parallels--cell phones to primitive phones to tin cans to canned pears to fresh pears to pear juice to....ahem.

Nice. Adding this to my favorites, love. beautiful.

[philomel]

*whimpers* Yeah?

*blinks* Naw.

There's got to be something wrong with it. *sniffs fic* There must be. I mean... something.

I'll find it, I will. Whatever's wrong with it. Must be... *wanders off*

*wanders back* Oh, and.

Awwwww.

Thank you, dear!! xD *hugs*

<333333

[cuppa_joe]

There is nothing wrong with this--nothing I'd change. It's perfect. And God, the flow. It sings. Beautiful.

I guess I could count this as my beta now. ;)

[philomel]

I'll probably pay for it with "High Speed" stuck in my head for the rest of my life. But got such a creative high while writing this. Haven't had that in a while. Not since "Apidae v. Vespidae," anyhow. Not with any recent poetry either.

*goes all squishy*

Thank you so much, Char! *mwuah* &hearts

[vensre]

::squeaks like my fangy kitty::

Billy+Dom may be my OTP, but this is the pairing I like just for the poetry of it. And you do it so beautifully, I can't even convey how much I like this, ahh~aaaa~AAAH!

Fricking ♥!!

::is coincidentially drinking pear juice, which really just makes the whole thing better::

[philomel]

*mewls*
*rubs up against leg*

Oh man, I know... Monaboyd has my heart, but I just adore Viggodom. They blend, and yet they are mismatched in many ways. One's the perfect complement for the other. Of course, there's a pure complementary dynamic with Dom and Billy, but... is diff'rent, no? Lurve both, muchly.

Speaking of complements. Err, compliments. Thank you!!!
You flatter me too much. *collapses*

Ah ha, I toast your pear juice with my fresh, ripe pear!
Except. I just finished it off. Oops.
Hee.

[vensre]

Oh, I don't know. I think I either flatter you just the right amount, or not enough by half. ::grimaces:: Eh. See, um. ::clings::

♥. Except, I need a bigger heart. ♥ There we go!

::scritchyscritchy::cuddles::

[philomel]

O giant heart of thou! How majestic thou art, o heart o!

*purrs & glomps*

[raynemaiden]

My Dom women. .. I'm almost lost for feedback. I think you've outdone yourself again. I've literally laughed myself to tears with a great big "awwww" at the end. And you really made this pearing *cough* I mean pairing work. You're dialogue is the best ever. This is just fantastic. *glomps the fic* *glomps you*

apparently, I can't escape the fruitiness of Domviggo *rolls eyes*

[philomel]

Dude. I was online far too somewhat late last night when I finished this, hoping you would be around for beta-ing. But here you are! And you like?! *squee*

Yes! Tears! *pumps fist* Always an achievement. *giggles*

Thank you, lovey! XD

*glomp-rubytackle-huggles you*

Re: apparently, I can't escape the fruitiness of Domviggo *rolls eyes*

[raynemaiden]

Aww I'm sorry I missed you. Last night was the first night that I have gone to bed really early in ages. I was wondering why I hadn't seen it yet when you posted it, I felt neglected. ;) Actually it was a great surprise to wake up to. I wouldn't have changed a thing anyway. It is a fantstical fic, truly. I bow down to your superior fic writing ability oh masterful one. *mwah*
Woot! I was rugby tackled. I feel special.

Re: apparently, I can't escape the fruitiness of Domviggo *rolls eyes*

[philomel]

Aw, I hope you had a good night's rest then, hon. Yeah, its deadline is tomorrow, err, now... the 30th. And I wasn't sure I could get beta done fast enough. So I just thought, "Screw it. I can always edit later."

'Course, ever the perfectionist/worrywart, I'm still convinced something needs altering.

*snort* Silly git.
You should. I don't even play rugby! :P

<3

[thalassatx]

So clumsy and awkward and REAL. Excellent.

[philomel]

*blinks* Oh, the story's clumsy... the action. Ah. Yes, don't you just love clumsy boys getting all clumsy on each other? 'S nice.

And thank you so very much!! *beams*

[philomel]

*smiles v. widely*

Thank you! X)