Can anybody stop this thing?

[philomel]

Ayune como esperanza
LOTR RPS
Monortensen
R-ish
Beta-less! *feels nekkid*
(As a result, am v. open to constructive criticism.)
For shirasade’s Inspiration challenge, though not a typical songfic per se

Comments

[gospelofpye]

this fic is extraordinarily good, the dialog is great, and so sweet and natural without being saccharine or predictable :)

go you!

[philomel]

without being saccharine or predictable

I can't stand being either of those things, so that means a lot to hear. Err, read, rather.

Thank you so much! :D

[hanarobi]

Wow and wow. Wonderful. I don't know why this pairing isn't done more often. They are really perfect together, seeing as how they are both totally insane. I really liked the way you portrayed them, especially Dom's "And don't break me." at the end. It added this incredibly deep sweet kinda sad tone to a great, funny, clever, hot, and original story.

[philomel]

Wow to you. Thank you very, very much!

They are really perfect together, seeing as how they are both totally insane.

*grins* Ain't that the truth? This pairing needs more exposure. Dom and Viggo are so electric together.
I worried that the "break me" line would seem over-the-top, as too much melodrama in a rather angst-free story. I'm glad it worked for you.

Eee, now you made me blush! *ears tingle*

[sajee]

awesome.
I must admit that it was just my viggo love that lead me to read it because I am one of those filithy Viggorli shippers (*hiss, boo*) but was like 'the teaser is hilarious.... and it involves viggo.... I better read it.' and I'm so glad I did. Go team you!

I thought that this exchange:
“Oh!” Dominic flipped open his cell phone, turned it on. “Yello!”
“Hello, Dom.” Viggo laughed into the phone. “I’m driving right now. My hand is frickin’ cramping from holding this damned cell phone. It’s late at night. And there’s a babbling hitchhiker in the car with me. And how are you?”
Dominic giggled, curling up toward the passenger door. “Well, it appears I’ve been kidnapped by this madman. He says he wants to force-feed me pears by the moonlight. Please send police. Fast.”
“I’m sorry, I have another call. Can I put up on hold?”
is comic genius. hee.

[philomel]

because I am one of those filithy Viggorli shippers

*gasp* Oh no! ;P
Behold, the power of Viggo. teehee.

I'm glad you took a chance on it, and that you enjoyed it as well.

Thank you very much! *beams brightly*

[pecos]

This is fantatic, darling! God, I feel like I've been hiding in the back of their heads! I was sure Dom was going to make a phone for Viggo out of the pear tins...but you're is so much cooler! Thank you!

[philomel]

*grin* Ah, Dom should make Viggo a phone out of pear tins! At least if he broke it (or tossed it out of the window), 'twould be easy to replace. And provide a nutritious snack as well. ;)

Thank you muchly! XD

[im_so_awkward]

oh.. wow.

“Wow, five hundred?” Viggo smirked, returning with an armful of pears. “You think we’d’ve seen the sunrise at least once by now.”

i just.. love this.. dialogue was just, perfect. very different from what i usually read and i adored it.
wish this fb was better, but i am amazed by this story! so, all in all, good job!

viggo/dom (or as i call it, viggom) is my favorite pairing. thank you so so so much for this. ♥

[philomel]

Aw, nono, thank you so much for your feedback, your kind words. I appreciate it!

Viggom. Hmmm. *rubs chin* I like it. :P

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