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crowgirl13 March 28 2011, 20:59:17 UTC
HOLY CRAP DUDE. O_O

If you ever thought of turning your powers to other venues, you could give King a run for his money. This is one of the most graphic and terrifying things I've read in a long time, and I've been meandering through the horror shelves lately. Wow.

This also makes me so sad for Dean.
Kick-ass work.

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philomel March 29 2011, 01:22:49 UTC
If it's any consolation, I kind of terrified myself writing it. *grin* I'd suspect there was a lot of latent King as well as Clive Barker reading subconsciously coming through in this.

Thank you, thank you! It makes me happy that you liked it so much. :)

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raynemaiden March 29 2011, 08:25:24 UTC
I'm really happy to see this. I think it is one of your more accomplished works not just because of the quality of writing but because of how far you pushed out of your comfort zone. I was hoping it would turn up on your journal sooner or later.

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philomel March 30 2011, 03:40:25 UTC
I always meant to post it... y'know, eventually. :) Thank you so much, hon. ♥

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geckoholic March 29 2011, 13:39:30 UTC
Wow, this is hard to read. I've read my fair share of hell!fic, and they make my stomach churn and go 'OH DEAN' but few have made me cry. This one did.

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philomel March 30 2011, 03:44:47 UTC
Aw, I'm sorry to have made you cry. It is a difficult story... it was difficult to write, caring about the boys yet also wanting to take on the original prompt and see where it lead. Thank you for reading.

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locknkey March 30 2011, 02:55:12 UTC
*flails*

Creepy and grotesque and terrifying, then it twists around to the end full of light and love and redemption. The visuals are amazing, as is the emotional ride. Like Sam, there were moments I forgot they were occupying a dream space - so visceral.

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philomel March 30 2011, 03:47:29 UTC
I'm really glad you felt that the love and redemption came through. It honestly made all that darkness and torment easier to write, knowing Sam would come to the rescue in the end. Thank you so much. <3

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locknkey March 30 2011, 03:51:50 UTC
I always like your writing, but this piece is super strong for me - i think because you get so tight into Sam's head space and in a way that is completely believable.

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philomel March 31 2011, 23:22:29 UTC
Aw, I'm really glad you felt that way. Sam often seems a bit harder to get than Dean -- not that Dean's simpler or Sam's more complex. Maybe that Dean's less successful at hiding his true feelings, so there's a kind of transparency (or translucence maybe) that's easier to work with in fic.

p.s. Really like that icon. :)

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layne67 April 13 2011, 04:22:20 UTC
That was seriously creepy and scary, in a totally good way!

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philomel April 13 2011, 15:49:42 UTC
Glad to hear it! :) Thank you!

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