akamizu - 赤水 - Chapter 4 "The Lonely"

[phillipthefrog]

Title: Akamizu - 赤水
Author: Zion Shadowlet
Beta: butterflysaga
Characters: Uruha, Aoi, OCs
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Genre: Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Rating: NC17
Summary: After the sudden disappearance of his fiancé Usagi, Kouyou travels to a remote town to find her in a place known ominously as “Akamizu” where she is in the powerful grip of a strange man who has

Comments

[sukiaki42]

i'm reading it! not really alive enough to make a good comment though >.> i really like it though~and i'm glad you didn't go with a "vampires are nice and fluffly" (<=bullshit) definitely gives the story more depth. i hate most recent vampire things but this is really good and i can't wait to see how their relationship develops. <3

[xadowangel]

Even though i'm on hiatus i come back sometimes and when i logged in i saw this update and i was like djalajskalksjjlajdka'ak!!!!!

And i read the whole thing in a breath just to know what happened. I'm gonna read it again in slow pace before i go back to studying.

I'm glad kouyou's not completely forgotten and someone's trying to contact him.

What is Aoi???

I guess i'll have to wait a few chaps to know that right??

Thnks so much for the update! I DEMAND MORE!!!

[toxic_duckybear]

Yesterday I was like, "I wonder if the next chapter of Akamizu is up" and you updated it today!
Omg AOI HAS FALLEN IN LOVE WITH URUHA. How could Uruha not see that *points finger at Uruha* OPEN YOUR EYES. AOI HAS FALLEN FOR YOU, YOU IDIOT.
I wonder if the love demon is really another creature like a vampire ?.?
Wait. If Aoi bites Uru, Aoi................................... will ................................ Die? AAAAAAAAOIIIII DON'T BITE HIIIIIM (Why am I talking to them? Its not like me, shouting at them is gonna change their minds. First off they can't hear me... I'm the idiot here T.T' ) But I hope he doesn't bite Uru if that's gonna kill him. Idk why and how but I feel like this story is gonna have a tragic end to it. Bring on the angst! >:3
Please update soon. <3

[wp_wolfpaws]

I'm following this lol. Just because I'm a sucker for vampire stories (& no, I'm not talking abt twilight/sparkling vampire or any of that cheesy crap :p)

This is a really interesting piece...can't really put a finger on the atmosphere to it but yeah...(vague comments are vague, I apologise) it's good that Kouyou's spell is broken though, I think now he can see Aoi in a more honest light & know him, not for the monster that he is. Do I make any sense to you with my comments?

Kiyomizu! The last time I went there, it was swamped with people, because it's a famous tourist spot in Kyoto =S (are you a psychic?!)

[yaawe]

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FINALLY! :3
Aoi should't have killed Usagi in front of Uru : /

I love the end where he becomes a shy school boy :3
and if I were Uruha, I would probably stay quiet and don't provoke him ^^"
but it's nice he mostly acts like Aoi was a human :)
haha and if there are any mistakes I didn't see them... :>