akamizu - 赤水 - Chapter 4 "The Lonely"

[phillipthefrog]

Title: Akamizu - 赤水
Author: Zion Shadowlet
Beta: butterflysaga
Characters: Uruha, Aoi, OCs
Pairing: Aoi/Uruha
Genre: Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Rating: NC17
Summary: After the sudden disappearance of his fiancé Usagi, Kouyou travels to a remote town to find her in a place known ominously as “Akamizu” where she is in the powerful grip of a strange man who has

Comments

[dei_chan5]

I'm following this too^^ I really like all of your storys and I was very happy to see that you updated a new chapter :3
Thank you really much it kinda gives me inspiration! *^*

Can't wait for the new chapter, I'm already too curious :D

[gordxblade]

woooow thank u for telling me that u upload....u are so big sweetheart honey thank uuuuu and this story is just amaizing

[anknick]

I wait for its updates so desperately!!!
This fic has something about it that just keeps you drawn... like Aoi /shot
I really like your writing style... keep them.updates coming XD

[butterflysaga]

I'm glad you didn't wait for that lazy beta of yours because now I'm able to read it like everyone else!

This chapter was awesome. I absolutely love the atmosphere and the description. I love the humid suffocation of the place. Makes it dreamlike and terrifying yet tantalizing (ie AOI). Crazy its a real place though!

I love their dynamic and I think you're doing an amzing job at their characters. Especially Aoi, as he's a supernatural creature yet still very human. You're doing very well at balancing the two into one cohesive being that is our love demon. ;D

I LOVED how you inserted bits and pieced of what makes up Usagi and her life.

I find it interesting that Aoi has decided to kill all of the women there. I understand why he killed Usagi and why he did it in front of Uruha but killing all of them is interesting.

...is he trying to also prove to himself that he is a horrible monster?

Aoi angst is love. ;)

Your psycho fan,

Butterfly

[trueblue_rr3]

I'm following it! *steps out of the darkness*

I first didn't like the idea of Aoi as a monster/filthy killer...but...well if he's a monster who can feel loneliness... (@^.^@)

I'm certainly very interested how this will turn out and it feels like I waited so long for this chapter.