Betrayal, Supernatural, NC-17

[phantisma]

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Betrayal
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, John, Caleb, Bobby
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3401

Summary: A sequel to Anything which was a Christmas request from nanakomatsu, Nothing, Something, To Be Good, Broken, To Be Strong, Nothing, No One, Alone, Yours, Mine, Better, Choice and Gathering. A traitor revealed...others

Comments

[idiot4dean]

This is definitely edge of the seat stuff. I'm glad that Dean is regaining his memory with the different incidents that happen.

I thought Robert was a nasty piece of work and jealous of Dean, from something you mentioned earlier. Bobby will never forgive himself if his son's friend turn up first.

Will Dean hide in the car Robert knows about or will he hide somewhere else and surprise whoever comes looking? Will Robert realise Dean has got out before anyone else arrives? If so will he go looking thinking that Dean is still harmless?

Looking forward to more soon.

[ravensword]

The tension ratchets up a notch...

[shadowchaser44]

This series is so suspenseful, I just love it! It's not that easy to predict what will happen next, which is great. In a way I can't blame Robert for wanting Sam for his own...who wouldn't? Wanting, and acquiring by force, however, are two different things. I'm thinking he should have stuck with wishful thinking. When John gets through with him...when Dean gets through with him...hell, when Bobby gets through with him...he's going to wish he'd never seen Sam. Heh, maybe give Robert to Gordon & his people for disposal when everyone's done beating the crap out of him.

It's nice to see some more of Dean's repressed memories surfacing, and some of Sam's memories as well. At least we know there were some good times for them before all this started happening. Can't wait to read the next part! Keep up the fantastic work!

[ravensword]

Thanks!

And...I'm not ignoring your email...I'm battling the flu all of a sudden...I'll get back to you soonish...

[shadowchaser44]

Figured you were busy. Hope you feel better soon; the flu is no fun.

[cathlabb]

this is so good:)
just love it....can`t wait
for the next part.....!!!
keep up the good work:)
lots of love

[ravensword]

Thanks!

[eskimosatan]

Yay! I don't feel like such an idiot for taking a geuss! *hugs* for a lovely chapter, full of revelations and mentions of rape and incest and... and just loveliness.

[ravensword]

Thanks...no, no idiots here...just people intensely interested in who the bad guys are...

[lady_foxfire]

Fuck no cookie for me. **pout** But can we blow Robert's balls off?

[ravensword]

LOL...no cookies...as to Robert's balls?

I haven't decided yet what his reward will be...