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phantisma

Broken Promises, Supernatural NC-17

Jan 11, 2007 13:11

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Broken Promises
Characters/Pairing: Dean/Sam
Rating: NC-17
Summary: A follow on to the "Points" ( Which Begins Here)and "Pieces" ( Which Begins Here) and "Paints" ( Which begins here") Verse, this follows The Promise of More and Promises Made...Um...Sam makes a choice ( Read more... )

points, supernatural, pieces, promises, paint

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cariadean January 11 2007, 21:36:12 UTC

FUCK!!!!

Oh my dear God - you've totally broken me into itty bitty pieces ...

I don't know whether I want to cry, scream or shout ...

I knew it was coming - knew it wasn't going to be pretty .. but I really wasn't expecting it to end like this ...

You are fucking fantastic ... and please forgive the swearing ...

I'm in shock!

ravensword January 11 2007, 21:40:40 UTC

Yes...shock is a good word. When I finished and looked at it, I wasn't sure how to react...then I tried to read it for editing....couldn't see the screen for a bit...

I've known for a while...but in an abstract sort of way.

I...think I need something warm and schloompy...straight up porn for the sake of porn...and a shower...a really, really hot shower...

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ravensword January 11 2007, 21:41:21 UTC

At least...dude...I just don't have the words.

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ravensword January 11 2007, 22:12:59 UTC

*inclines head in thanks*

I just...sort of...Dean wouldn't ever go on with out Sam...and Sam couldn't face himself without Dean...

Now I have to go do some approximation of work.

anonymous January 11 2007, 21:40:12 UTC

Perfect ending, the two go together. Sad, sad, but perfect.

ravensword January 11 2007, 21:41:53 UTC

Thank you.

anonymous January 11 2007, 21:45:15 UTC

i've been reading your stuff for a while now and all i can say is that i love your work. in fact this is the first comment i've ever written for a fic (and i've read a lot)

I love your keeperverse and ages but this is the darkest stuff i've ever read and its just....guh! so good. i knew sam would kill him one day. i knew there would be no happy ending but i still had some remenant of hope there. i always have hope.........i'm babbling so i'll shut up now and receed back in to the woodwork from whence i came and just keep reading. keep up the good work.

ravensword January 11 2007, 22:08:54 UTC

Thank you for taking the time to comment. Feedback really is a writer's life's blood...and after all the blood letting in this story...

Thank you...for appreciating my darkness...

nighean_isis January 11 2007, 21:55:19 UTC

::shatters::

::speechless::

I may be coherent by this weekend and able to comment more on this. I'm going to reread the entire P!verse so I can get the full impact. Yeah, I know - I'm a glutton for punishment, but this type of story is best read all together and all at once.

One last thing: ::bows in awe:: Truly, truly a fantastic storyline. It's so *Sam and Dean*. A completely *FUCKED UP* Sam and Dean, but still Sam and Dean. And the image Sam holds in his (their) minds as Dean (and himself?) dies... ::shatterpoint::

ravensword January 11 2007, 22:07:16 UTC

I will be seeing you this weekend at the marathon, yes? Cause we can babble incoherently about it then if you like. I may have found my words again by then.

I've been reading the whole thing over the last few days, jumping back and forth to pick stuff out that I needed to finish it...and there's still stuff that I read and look at and go..."Did I write that?"

Yeah...when he did that (cause it completely wasn't me) I bawled...like a baby...

nighean_isis January 11 2007, 23:07:25 UTC

Yes, we'll meet this weekend - and I'm *so* looking forward to it. I owe you a big hug for this fic and all the others. You're one of my fave five authors in this fandom.

You cried? I'm too numb to cry. The line that just *BROKE* me:

"...around the random memories firing through him as he bleeds and Sam grabs one…**an image of a boy on his father’s knee, holding a blanket wrapped bundle…**" (emphasis mine).

That just *broke* me. The image of those two innocent little boys, vs. the blood-drenched, twisted, dark, damaged men they became. The progression of their descent into darkness and death...whoa. Am still in awe of your talent, lady.

ravensword January 11 2007, 23:23:52 UTC

Oh...broken...so completely...and numb...then shattered, then numb again.

And yes. I cried. Several times.

Tonight I'm going to pull the whole verse into a single file. I'll probably bawl my eyes out.

Cause...when it started I didn't know. I had no idea...it was sad and owie...but not...this...and yes...the image of that memory...of tiny, innocent, unbroken boys superimposed over broken, bleeding, dying boys...ugh...