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phantisma

Yours, Supernatural, NC-17

Jan 06, 2007 18:02

Fandom: Supernatural
Title: Yours
Characters/Pairings: Sam/Dean, John, Caleb
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3009

Summary: A sequel to Anything which was a Christmas request from nanakomatsu, Nothing, Something, To Be Good, Broken, To Be Strong and Nothing, No One, Alone. John and Caleb got Sam and Dean away, but Dean is lost inside the conditioning, ( Read more... )

supernatural, slave!dean

Comments 72

marylizh January 7 2007, 03:16:39 UTC

OMG!! Killing me here!! I need this book and my hot chocolate right now. I need to cheat and turn to the last page and see how it ends!!!!!!
Question: Caleb seems awfully comfortable ordering Dean around like a slave?? I dont think he's the traitor but.......
And then there's John--he doesnt understand what Dean means when he says “I can be good. I can be. I’ll be good for you.”. I dont think John's gonna handle it real well the first time Dean comes out of the shower and "preps" for him.
As usual, you have left me wanting more!!! Fantastic job!!!

ravensword January 7 2007, 03:34:13 UTC

Don't mean to be killing...well...maybe I do...

Poor John...he really doesn't understand.

sxeraven January 7 2007, 03:22:16 UTC

Well... it can either be good, or bad, what John said... about Dean being his... Frankly the first thing I thought was, that's bad... but then... knowing how calculating a person John Winchester is, even though he knows he's way in over his head and he probably can't think TOO clearly right now... I thought maybe... maybe John said that so later, once Sam is healed, he can give Dean to Sam? That way Dean will believe that he's Sam's again, because he's been given? Because Dean is still far more broken than Sam. And Dean needs Sam more than anyone else right now, even if Dean is too slave!mind to realize it ( ... )

ravensword January 7 2007, 03:41:44 UTC

I don't know that John's thinking that clearly right now. LOL...

More to come, probably tomorrow...

sxeraven January 7 2007, 03:47:04 UTC

Yaye! yes! Tomorrow is good!

*lurves*

God DAMN! krebsbach January 7 2007, 03:51:23 UTC

Your an evil, evil, weaver of addicting fiction. Poor Dean, Sam and John. I just want grab all 3 of them up and hug them. I love this story and each part steal away another piece of my heart. MORE PLEASE.

Re: God DAMN! ravensword January 7 2007, 04:01:29 UTC

*bows*

Yes. Evil. I completely own the evil.

More to come. Currently writing the next chapter of one of my other WIPs...then the next bit of this tomorrow.

Thanks for reading!

WIPs marylizh January 7 2007, 05:50:23 UTC

Is a sequel to "Promise of More" one of your WIPs? I know you have Ages, slave!dean and Hunters.

Re: WIPs ravensword January 7 2007, 06:00:15 UTC

Yes...there is a sequel to come for "Promise of More"....it's just kind of on the back burner...because evil!Dean was way intense for me...and that ride really wrung me out.

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culturegeek76 January 7 2007, 03:55:42 UTC

Good Grief. Poor Dean... with the trying to get naked and Caleb not understanding and John barely getting it and oh gods. The panic about there being no water and all the progress undone. My my my.
Your story is so bloody amazing, I almost can't stand it.
more more more more more. Pretty please?

ravensword January 7 2007, 04:04:17 UTC

I promise I'm working on more...hopefully tomorrow....

Poor Dean. Poor John. Poor Sam...all the broken pretties....

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ravensword January 7 2007, 06:36:10 UTC

*hands you tissues*