[Fic] Axel/Roxas -- to burn a hole in the sky (you have to start somewhere); 2/2

[phantasmik]

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[ravewalker]

Holy fucking ajhfcjhgwvouybsljhba. You thought it wouldn't live up to my expectations? oh my gods. all the tiny references, all the asides and small lines and Axel getting sick and Roxas in dead space and the Tardis leaving them things and everything and aakvgakjhv the last section OH MY GODS. So, so amazing. I owe you like a year's supply of tea or chocolate or a cross-stitch or something awesome this is incredible brb going to sit in a corner and rock.

[hiza_chan]

I WAS SO SCARED. Because I kept you waiting for so long and then it just kept going and going and I was worried that I let it get away from me and just aslghf; I tried my best to dedicate every single word to you. Seriously. Dead Space, Bioshock references, astrophysics and domesticity. Mmm, tea and chocolate. Now I want some tea. I should go make some tea. But we don't have chocolate. :(

Forgive me, I am sleepy and babbly. I AM SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT. Neff said that you like things more bittersweet, so I'm really glad you liked that last section. And just. Yes. ILU again, and I am so terribly sorry that this took so long. I feel like a terrible human being, I really do. ♥

[ravewalker]

akgvsjgdkgva oh please like I minded waiting! I knew it'd be awesome and :3. Gotta love all the references you managed to snaffle in there, you are a total wonder! And yeah, I like bittersweet uncertainy-type endings, and holy frick. Yes. ILU LOTS AND LOTS and you are most certainly not a terrible human being! silence! can't thank you enough for writing this wonder. ♥♥♥

[hiza_chan]

♥♥♥ /blush

[halcyon_iota]

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My brain is dead. you killed it via awesomeness overdose. This is fucking perfect.

[hiza_chan]

Dead brain! Excellent~ ♥

[faorism]

[hiza_chan]

:DDDD

Did that ending work a little bit better? I was hoping it did, but with me, who knows.

I AM NOT WORTHY OF THESE GIFS. THEY ARE SO LOVEY. ♥ ILU, and seriously, thank you again. You are a perfect human being.

[faorism]

It was magnificant. Those gifs? BASICALLY ALL OF THEM WERE FOR DAT ENDING. It fit so perfectly that I'm a little gobsmacked. Thematically it works with the entire fic; symbolically it works with both series; and overwhelming it works with the introduction, which is what I was hoping for when I asked for a slight rewrite. Also, the openendedness of it all is... GAH. BEAUTIFUL.

No. You. ♥

[hiza_chan]

Oh excellent. I was thinking about leaving it the way you suggested, but I decided to add a couple lines instead. I AM SO GLAD IT WORKED OUT WELL. Thematically it works with the entire fic; symbolically it works with both series; and overwhelming it works with the introduction Again, thank god for that. I was talking to Allie about it and this is exactly what I was trying to convey- linking it back to the first, wrapping up this fic, and linking back to the introduction. SO THANK YOU, YOU SAVED ME FROM STRESSING ABOUT THAT.

♥♥♥

[theplumtomato]

Oh my god. Woman. What you are words cannot describe.
THIS IS PURE GOLD. Pure.
With the beginning and trying to get to Axel, and the Doctor remeniscing about his past, and Roxas being unsure if he should touch him and just fucking hell, woman.
And the TARDIS. I absolutely loved your take on her!
And the Doctor and Axel's shenanigans.
And your description of the Doctor and Sora's antics.
And Axel getting sick and not liking chicken noodle soup.
And Axel investigating the the bathtub and splashing Roxas and trying to get him in the tub.
And just holy fucking hell. I actually can't get over how unbelievably amazing this is. You absolute genius <3

[hiza_chan]

Your comment makes me blush. And it also makes me very happy.
It isn't a secret at this point that I was madly in love with the TARDIS well before the TARDIS-lady episode. Trufax, I wrote the majority of the TARDIS scenes in this way before that episode. Which amuses me. But I like her so much.
Axel and Roxas would be wonderful companions. I believe this with all my heart.
Writing that bathtub scene was maybe my favorite bit. I should have expanded on it.
I'm so glad you liked it though, you have no idea. There are happy fuzzies in my chest now. ♥

[theplumtomato]

The TARDIS-lady makes me giggle, and that just shows that you are not only a genius but either psychic or able to see into to future.
And I also agree hard that you shouldn't expanded the bathtub part, it made me chuckle and I loved it <3
I'm glad that I can give you warm chest fuzzies, you little cutie!!!

[theplumtomato]

Should've. Not shouldn't. I'm clearly on crack today XD

[kaos_sparrow]

I will restrain myself from keyboard-smash, but only because OMG THE FEELINGS.
And I got nooooo references BUT THAT'S OKAY because tear. TEAR.
*sniffle*

[hiza_chan]

I'm glad you liked it! I think. That does mean you liked it, right? Hopefully, at any rate. Thank you so much~ ♥

[kaos_sparrow]

ooooooooh yes it means I liked it.
DOCTOOOOOOOOOOOOOR. And AXEEEEEEEEEEEEL. And ROXAAAAAAAAAAS. ROXAS!