Comments | phantasmik: [Fic] Axel/Roxas -- to burn a hole in the sky (you have to start somewhere); 2/2

phantasmik

[Fic] Axel/Roxas -- to burn a hole in the sky (you have to start somewhere); 2/2

May 23, 2011 04:49

[fic] crossover, [au] time travel, [crossover] doctor who/kingdom hearts, [f.videogame] kingdom hearts, [au] domestic, [pairing] axel/roxas, [verse] burning holes in the sky, [character] roxas, [genre] fluff, [f.television] doctor who

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faorism May 23 2011, 12:47:24 UTC

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hiza_chan May 25 2011, 05:47:28 UTC

:DDDD

Did that ending work a little bit better? I was hoping it did, but with me, who knows.

I AM NOT WORTHY OF THESE GIFS. THEY ARE SO LOVEY. ♥ ILU, and seriously, thank you again. You are a perfect human being.

faorism May 25 2011, 11:55:19 UTC

It was magnificant. Those gifs? BASICALLY ALL OF THEM WERE FOR DAT ENDING. It fit so perfectly that I'm a little gobsmacked. Thematically it works with the entire fic; symbolically it works with both series; and overwhelming it works with the introduction, which is what I was hoping for when I asked for a slight rewrite. Also, the openendedness of it all is... GAH. BEAUTIFUL.

No. You. ♥

hiza_chan May 26 2011, 02:39:17 UTC

Oh excellent. I was thinking about leaving it the way you suggested, but I decided to add a couple lines instead. I AM SO GLAD IT WORKED OUT WELL. Thematically it works with the entire fic; symbolically it works with both series; and overwhelming it works with the introduction Again, thank god for that. I was talking to Allie about it and this is exactly what I was trying to convey- linking it back to the first, wrapping up this fic, and linking back to the introduction. SO THANK YOU, YOU SAVED ME FROM STRESSING ABOUT THAT.

♥♥♥

faorism June 11 2011, 18:15:39 UTC

I CAN'T STOP REREADING.

hiza_chan July 10 2011, 02:01:35 UTC

BTW, THIS COMMENT MADE ME GLEE EVERYWHERE WHEN I GOT IT ABOUT A MONTH AGO. JUST SO YOU KNOW.

faorism July 10 2011, 02:52:51 UTC

JUST SO YOU KNOW, I FUCKING LOVE CASTIEL AND SUPERNATURAL AND DEAN AND OMG I LEGIT JUST FINISHED THE EPISODE WITH THE PROPHET AND CASTIEL WAS AMAZING IN IT AND PROBABLY SAID MY FAVORITE LINE IN THE SERIES SO FAR ("YOU SHOULD HAVE SEEN LUKE" RE: THE FAIL OF THE PROPHET'S LIVING CONDITIONS) AND OMG I LAUGHED SO FUCKING HARD AND IT WOULDN'T HAVE HAD THIS PLEASURE WITHOUT YOU.

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